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Gatekeepers Book 1: Darkness

I enjoyed the story a lot. Both worlds are very thought out. Atlantis City was interesting and cool because of its background. It made me sad when suddenly the setting changed and I am still curious about what happened there. Sometimes, it took my focus away from the storyline because I badly wanted to know more about the bombing. Here and there were grammar mistakes and sometimes there was a quotation mark lost or suddenly there where it shouldn't be. If the author rereads the story I think they can get those errors out. I also thought sometimes things were overly described. I know dragons have lots of colors but the paragraphs of how they looked were long. It was nice how the thoughts of characters was in cursive. This book has a lot of potential! I am looking forward to the next book. I think this one stops rather abrupt. Maybe it needs a few more chapters? Until Draycos wins or loses the tournament maybe? So I did like this story! But I feel like it has two plots in one with the Atlantic City and dragon world. Good luck with the next books! I will definitely keep reading :)

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The God's Energy

It wasn't my cup of tea. I did like how you put a quote at the beginning of every chapter. Normally, I don't read books about the divine. This book makes you think about it. The author doesn't just try and make you believe in God, I feel the book just wants to get you thinking about a possible more to the universe. The story does have a lot of potential, but there are a lot of errors in the text. Sometimes wrong prepositions are used. The conjugation of he/she isn't always correct. I think that if the author proofreads it again before posting it, a lot of mistakes could be taken out. I believe that with some extra revisions this book could really become something.

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The Hope: Book One in NoeL and LeoN

I enjoyed this book a lot! The first chapter is very intriguing and made me want to keep reading. Your writing style is professional and clear. I liked the way everything was described and written a lot. Here and there, there are some small errors, but I wouldn't concern yourself too much with them at this stage. The plot is still to be revealed and I can't wait to read more of this!

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Dance of the Luna

I loved the story this far. It has the right amount of cuteness and frustration. The story in itself is absolutely captivating. At the last 5 chapters I really started nail biting because of the suspense. The only thing I can criticise is the switch in tenses. Mostly you write in present tense but sometimes you switch to past. You sometimes write I does and it do (which should be the other way around) or write I had and then a present word instead of the perfect participle. I do know this is still a WIP and I read the part in the beginning. This is not to break you down! I just want to help! I really really loved the story! And I can't wait for the next update!

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