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TIME

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Summary

A 14th poetry collection solely written by Domar Esmabe ♡ 🕟

Status
Complete
Chapters
15
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

REMEMBER

Does it break your heart

That you tore me apart?

You said that if we continue this shit

Something will hit

"I will lose everything in me"

But you didn't even think of losing me...

So you obeyed them and chose her

To make your mind calm and better

But in your heart, you know

That I am the reason why it glows

Make your reason even more realistic

We broke up with a touch of something toxic

"Maybe it's not our time yet"

I fully wish we never met

And you're wrong, it will never be our time

I wasted the first three months of mine

How did you go on with your life

After you hit me with your knife?

While me, I'm barely surviving these days

Because I can still see your fucking face

And I can still hear your fucking voice

Because I still remember our rejoice

But I know someday

I will forget those days

And I will forget you

But I will never ever forgive you

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rhyming very good

a year
author

Your writing is absolutely fantastic powerful, emotional, and deeply moving. It’s the kind of work that deserves to be seen by more eyes, beyond this space. There's a massive platform one that turns stories like yours into monthly streams of passive income. if you're open to something bigger… I’d love to show you what’s possible.

a year

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