Era Cil
@era10_
Hi, welcome to my world. I am a shy person but writing made me feel my voice and i hope reading my works would define something for you. Thank you!
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I enjoyed the slow pace revealation of the story and the protagonist`s storyline. You also used the present tense in an engaging way and how you revealed the change in perspective by dropping her father`s reaction to his finger is beautiful, well done. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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