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Bitter lies
"She should have reported them right away when this first started. The boys should have known better either way it is wrong what they did to her. The girls took petty jealousy too damn far. She wasn't persuing the guys, they were persuing her, how's that her fault. As for that one bitch being mad she got punched, oh well she shouldn't have been a skank starting shit. Keep writing you're good now to find the next installment to see what happens next. "
Good read!
"This story has extreme potential with proofreading and editing. If you can overlook the errors, it's an amazing story. It's an emotional read and it was done with care. I loved the uniqueness about Marla. The kings are really interesting to me and it broke my heart that they put her in the terrifying position. The queens just need to rot. 😂"
Decent
"Everything is good so far, spelling needs some work but I understand the points just fine."
Shockingly Good
"I've come to realize the writers are mostly new to this. So imagine my surprise, a very pleased surprise I might add. The author is smoking hot. I could have read it all in one sitting if I hadn't fallen asleep reading. It's so great to read a book where the main female character doesn't immediately open her legs. She actually fought and didn't spread wider. She may have had an orgasm but it wasn't voluntary, and she felt cheated. Slow burns and fighting for forgiveness is what makes these types of books so great. I've read many top authors, this one can hold her on with them. I want the next book! "
Fantastic!
"More than half way through, and I am hooked. Such a great read. Suspense and plot is great. I have not figured out 100% what's up with the uncle but I have a slight suspicion. It's obvious this is a 4 way love affair but the getting there is fun to read about. I wonder if something happened to her for her to not want to talk... that will be interesting if it comes out. Grammar and spelling is fine. I think a seen a few mistakes here and there but nothing much. Writing style is great. Love the different pov's and how everything is laid out. Really don't like long paragraphs. Easy to know is talking as it is all stated clearly. Really enjoying it."
Great start to the full story.
"Good job so far. Good plot with all the details. Now on to the next to find out what happens."
Very interesting
"Keeps on your toes"
Bitter lies
"Interesting story. Recommend "
Bitter Lies
"Quite an interesting book. "
Iol pinkie pie
" I really like no love this book . Except for some spelling mistakes I really love the plot your writing way . Can't wait for Bitter truths"
Good work
"Excellent wtiting eagerly awaing bitter truths"
Loved loved loved loved the book
"I loved every bit of this novel can't wait to know what happens in the next book ❤️❤️❤️❤️"
Totally enjoyed this book!
"I am so intrigued for the second book. Great writing author. Never a dull moment…"
Best novel
"Grate novel love it can wait for the next one it has me hooked "
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So far so good.
"I just don't like the 3 guys roughing her up."
Bitter lies
"I have enjoyed the story so far I still don’t trust the uncle fully let’s see where book two goes well done "
An honest review, please don't take it wrong.
"Grammatical errors yes.. Here, hear etc.. The plot was very good which is why I started reading, but the story can be elaborated with everyone's perspective. The story seems incomplete, with no clear business of the uncle, the boys' companies (their father's companies to be precise). Then if the female character is shown strong, may be her character can be more enhanced. And then of course the RAPE part. It is an unsettling feeling. We cannot really put it on the good side. Probably the story could've had more chapters explaining their feelings and instead of R**e how they tried to capture her heart only to be broken because it was clear they are going to use her for the information. "
No idea
"The errors are grudtrsting and the mute helplessness while arguing with herself is lame."
Had potential but failed
"Sorry to the author but this story had tons of holes in it and things that didn't add up not to mention making a strong character seem stupid and weak. To be fair I didn't make it to the last chapter. When she was being assaulted in the bathroom I tapped out and found something else to read"
