¿Qué opinas?
Needs either heavy editing or a rewrite
"I wish you had someone to help with the language problem and help make the story easier to follow. Knowing that English isn’t your primary language helped me to understand some of the confusing sentences Chapter 24 doesn’t need changing. It’s so called smut was quite tame and not at all offensive compared with other stories I’ve read on Inkitt. I overall enjoyed the story once I got my brain to understand the language differences. Thanks you for sharing your story. "
Needs either heavy editing or a rewrite
"I wish you had someone to help with the language problem and help make the story easier to follow. Knowing that English isn’t your primary language helped me to understand some of the confusing sentences Chapter 24 doesn’t need changing. It’s so called smut was quite tame and not at all offensive compared with other stories I’ve read on Inkitt. I overall enjoyed the story once I got my brain to understand the language differences. Thanks you for sharing your story. "
Needs either heavy editing or a rewrite
"I wish you had someone to help with the language problem and help make the story easier to follow. Knowing that English isn’t your primary language helped me to understand some of the confusing sentences Chapter 24 doesn’t need changing. It’s so called smut was quite tame and not at all offensive compared with other stories I’ve read on Inkitt. I overall enjoyed the story once I got my brain to understand the language differences. Thanks you for sharing your story. "
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Beautiful
"A very sweet love story. Enjoyed reading it. "
Overall a very nice story
"Love the flow of the story. Nice work Author 😍💐"
Enjoyed this book
"This was a fun read"
His Sweetheart
"I believe you will turn out to be one of the best writers! The story line and characters are strong! Grammar is a bit of a problem but understandable due to it being not your first language! Thanks for sharing your hard work "
Awsome
"Its sooo good"
His sweetness
"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it from beginning to end just a few grammatical errors but such an enjoyable book really hope there's a book 2 for Marcus and mia❤️💕❤️💕❤️"
His Sweetheart!
"It was a beautiful story and I can’t put it down. It needs editing. Very good and thank you author."
Heart warming
"The plot is heart warming and interesting. I am looking forward for this story.....hope you will update soon. Thank you for this warm story. "
It fine
"Michael is really falling hard for Anna which is a good but she's also becoming his weakness"
I enjoyed regardless of the rating I gave
"I enjoyed the story, it needs a edit, but it was easily overlooked with the plot being good."
His Sweetheart
"Good story!"
His Sweetheart
"I love this. Happy it ended well. "
Nice
"Story is getting interesting now. I'm liking it, hope for early updates."
Great characters
"I like the story"
His Sweetheart
"Make time to edit the sentences just put them in a proper way"
Great potential
"This story has great potential but needs quite a bit of editing. It’s interesting and you definitely want to read more. "
