¿Qué opinas?
Their verena
"More chapters please"
Their Verena
"Great short story. So much happened, car accident, kidnapping meeting twins and having feelings for them"
Nice imagery
"I like the story line. BBW, BBM stories are very similar to each other. However, I enjoy the characters and the individual personalities the writer gives them. I enjoyed this story. "
Love it so much
"Love it so much can't wait for more"
Twinz
"It was very suspenseful, I really like the twin aspect. The intimacy was electric but I was weirded out by the physical closeness of Verena and her father. The story could have done without the parts where the father coddled her. She is an adult not some small child. "
Interesting book
"The whole dad love thing is weird. Plus the way she writes words that aren’t even related to the word she wants to write. "
Good foundation
"The book has a good foundation for the story and the first intimate scene was written well but the rest of it felt rushed. Also needs a good edit by a fluent English writer but overall what is there was thoughtfully written."
Interesting plot
"Interesting plot. The grammatical errors make it a little hard to read though."
Ok read
"Its is an ok read for time pass "
Amazing
"Your writing style is amazing "
Their Verena
"I try very hard not to write negative reviews. As a fellow author, I admire the effort, and we should all feel accomplished with our work. This story, however, has obvious problems. English does not seem to be the writer's first language, which presents issues with word choice and punctuation. That, in turn, creates a choppy storyline. The relationships between the characters are confusing to say the least, mostly due to the breakdown of the English language. This could be an awesome story in the author's native language, but the translation doesn't deliver."
Their Verena
"I AM sorry but the płot was terrible. During the reading I got the idea that Verona is a child. And those twins?! Come on. Relation with her father was unpropriate...disaster..."
