marsha rice

The mind works in strange ways, and sometimes it spills out in words. My erotic stories will give you a hint as to where my mind is at.

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Erotic Shorts

Always a big fan of this author. I especially like Erotic Shorts because of the style, short, sweet, and to the point. In five quick chapters you get five complete stories. It's hard to pick a favorite, and I've read them each three times now, and probably will read them again. I'm definitely going back to the library!!! Just finished number six, hot, hot, hot. Absolutely love her dress.

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No time for Hesitation.

Absolutely loved this story. It was so descriptive, that it felt like you were one of the neighbors staring out the window watching everything unfold. Literally felt sorry for the characters, and laws or no laws, O'Leary did the right thing, even if he did have an ulterior motive.

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A Feast of Consequences

Brilliant. One of the most engrossing stories I've ever read. It kept me wanting more through the entire book. Their love for each other was as combustible as the forest. Too many lives were headed for disaster, and instead of coming to a crashing halt, low and behold, a happy ending. Terrific writing. Can't wait to read more by this author. I only wonder why this isn't a published book. I would buy it.

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101

I am so sorry. I try hard to be positive or at least constructive in my reviews, and I should probably keep my opinion to myself, but I am disappointed in what I've read so far. First chapter is an amazing story, loved it. The second is a great start, but goes absolutely nowhere, and doesn't end. The poem I will not comment on because poetry is absolutely not my thing, and I understand it is very subjective to the reader. As more stories are added, my opinion is changing. On the surface they can be a little bazaar, but artful at the same time. They are, however, very well written, and I look forward to more.

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Roommate FWB #1

Absolutely fell in love with the characters, and I would love to have the cabin. The author is a wonderful storyteller and I look forward to reading more of his work. Having someone proofread this piece, and the use of spellcheck would make this story perfect.

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First Love

It read as one of the most realistic stories of two young people exploring their sexuality and experimenting with it. I was always amazed at how aggressive young girls can be, maybe because I never was until I was older. Other than a little needed proofread, it was a lovely little story.

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Erotic Shorts 3

I know that there are only three stories so far, but just let me say, they are three awesome stories, and I can't wait for more. My only criticism is for a proofread to correct some minor grammatical errors that really have no effect on the stories themselves. As always, a great job, and I'm looking forward to many more.

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Erotic Short Shorts

I absolutely love this format. This is exactly what short story erotica is all about. No need for all of the background noise, just get down to it and "get er done" as somebody once said. These are eight wonderful little quickies, who could ask for more? Job very well done. I love the cover photo.

I would just like to add that more is better. The additional stories are wonderfully delightful.

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Rated R- One Shots

Five excellent stories that are all very well structured, easy reads. They could all use some editing for repetitiveness and proofreading for spelling and word choice. I mention this as a constructive way to polish these well written stories.

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Mr. Woods

There is no way to offer any improvement on a story this good. Short, sweet and to the point. A hot, hot, hot theme. Who doesn't love hearing about someone's first time? This author is a fantastic storyteller, and so descriptive, it makes you feel a little voyeuristic. Nice overall job on this one.

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Slow Dancing

I have come back to this story for a re-read three times now. It's one of my favorites. I think the story line is great. It's well-constructed with proper grammar and punctuation and flows really well. I know that I will be back and read it again.

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Short Erotic Stories

This format is one of my favorites. The three individual stories are all unique to themselves and extremely well written. Great story lines, well fabricated, and hot, hot, hot. I hope this author adds more, soon. Great job.

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erotic shorts 2

J. A. White is becoming a master of these short shorts. Following the awesome Erotic Shorts, Erotic Shorts 2 looks to be just as exciting based upon the first story. This is one of the absolute hottest threesomes you could ever imagine. Tina celebrates her college graduation by doing her fantasy crush and his friend at the same time in a very unexpected way. If you don't get wet reading this, maybe you're not alive. The stories keep coming and they're just getting better.

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Adrian

Wonderful story line. It's unusual to find a female looking to be dominated, but Adrian accommodates her in such a HOT, desirable way. The more he commands, the more Izzy wants him. The way the story was brought full circle, connecting the beginning with the end was nicely done, and in a way that still left you wanting more. I suspect that this story could continue on, but the two of them should probably slow down just a bit before they wear themselves out. One tiny criticism: a quick proofread for grammar and word choice would have made this perfect. Nice job. Looking forward to more from this author.

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Squirrel Jim's

This is one fantastic story. Absolutely love the plot, the character names, and the ending couldn't have been better. The only other comment to whoever reads this review...stop reading this and read Squirrel Jim's, you won't regret it.

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Roommates who dream

I can't help but to get wrapped up in every story that J. A. White writes, and this one is no different. A fantasy story of three friends, of whom I would like to take the place of any one of them. What a fun filled lighthearted tale. A fast paced easy read that flows well. Can't ask for much more. A few non-essential spelling corrections would make this perfect.

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FWB #2

This was the first story that I read from Mr. White, and I've been a big fan ever since, loving all of his stories. I just finished reading FWB #2 for the third time. I absolutely LOVE these characters, and I know I will read it again sometime. My favorite story, period. I'm sorry I did not review this before. With a little proofreading to tighten up some grammar, this story would be on top of the absolute perfect scale.

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Marsha's Story

Absolutely loved this little side story of a fascinating character from The Game. You really feel like you get to know her. And the sex! Wow. Every woman needs a Danny, and a Frank. If we could all be so lucky. Mr. White is a great story teller and this did not disappoint. It could use a minor proof read, but other than that, well done.

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The Palace

Amazing story. Love them when they are short and to the point. This was hot, hot, hot. Would have loved to be part of the action. Got excited just reading it.

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The Game

I absolutely loved this story. This was not the sort of adventure that you normally expect with erotica. This was a great plot line, and the sex just made it hot, hot, hot. Mr. White has an amazing way to take you on a journey with his stories, and this one did not disappoint. A little proof read to correct some grammar and punctuation would make it perfect, however, it did not take away from the story. GREAT JOB. And as always, I'll look forward to your next work; I'm a big fan.

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Joyce #1374

Definitely an interesting story. I would have liked to have read a little more about her mindset prior to the killings, also more detail on her inner feelings while she was in jail on death row. Now that I've said that, I am reminded that she's only fourteen. What exactly would go through the mind of a fourteen-year-old, convicted of killing two people? Oh, yeah, I forgot, grape jelly! All in all, a great story. Look forward to more from this author.

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A Kitten in Delightful Trouble

I am becoming a huge fan of this author. His stories, including this one, are so descriptive, it's like watching them unfold in a movie. If I was to offer a criticism, it would be to have it move just a little faster past the splinters themselves and get to the interaction between Erin and Peter sooner and focus totally on that. BUT, I certainly don't mean that as a negative, just a personal choice. As for the title, I love the double meaning of "Kitten in Trouble". (Kitten being slang for vagina in many areas)

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I'll show you mine...

In a word, engrossing. The visualization that the author created, made me think I was watching a movie. He makes you feel like you know these two people, as they discover each other. A definite feel good story with a happy ending, how unusual. I will admit that the recapping of the story within conversations was a little distracting once or twice, however, I understand why it was there. I so look forward to other stories by this author, and hope they are as entertaining as "I'll show you mine..."

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Hidden Pleasures

Nice set up. I was sorry that I had to stop reading, I'm anxious to see where it goes from here... I waited to comment again until the story was complete. I was not disappointed. Yet another great plot line from this author. I love the characters, including the minor ones. They add a lot to the story, which flows very smoothly. My only criticism would be the need for a proof read and spell check before posting. That in itself, however does not diminish from the story, which I enjoyed very much and look forward to his next one.

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The adventures take a kinky turn

Couldn’t wait to see how the relationships would connect within the group.

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