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I adore this story
"This story is really great. It keeps everything moving well and is very engaging. I love that we don't have to go through chapter after chapter of the FMC fighting against the MMC to establish her pride. Some things that could be better.: More dick. Like, a lot more. The description of things is intensely repetitious and grating. Every time his eyes are described they are always glacial -blue, every time we talk about the collar it is always "the 2.5 inch leather....". Every time he provides aftercare it is always "Two long minutes." Every time his shoes are described they are "bespoke leather...." . It is so consistent it is really bothersome. At some point you have to change up the vocabulary or just simply say, "eyes", "collar" etc... The only other thing is that it's hard to tell if the characters are supposed to know about the person taking pictures. It's narrated by the female main character so you would assume that she's aware, but her actions don't show that. There's a lot of things that aren't discussed, so maybe she does?. Also, I'm unclear if the first time we saw them actually have sex was supposed to be their first time. Ok, those are my critiques, but truly a worthwhile read. Thanks, author!"
Well-written and interesting
"I like the way the author writes, and how the author leads the reader through the story. It is quite a good one at that."
Sein Schoßhündchen
"Die Geschichte die sehr witzig und humorvoll begann,wird dann zu einer sehr erotischen ,außergewöhnlichen Liebesgeschichte . Logan und Remi müssen sich erst ihren Ängsten stellen damit sie fähig sind sich ihre Gefühle zu offenbaren. Die Autorin beschreibt sehr gefühlvoll die etwas eigenwillige BDSM Beziehung der Beiden. Ein paar grammatikalische Fehler haben sich im Text eingeschlichen. Die Story ist unbedingt lesenswert für alle Erwachsene über 18+."
Great Story
"Great story having suspense, drama, romance. For a short story the author developed multiple aspects or subplots to the overall story. The plot developed the bond of two people growing together and building love and committment that will last a lifetime. I enjoyed it from start to finish. "
An Unexpected Addictive Read
"I went into this story with reservations. To say I was stepping out of comfort zones was an understatement, but I stuck with it because the characters were real, raw, and compelling. I needed to see them through. I needed to know how the story unfolded, how the issues got addressed, how the people figured themselves out. I am glad I read everything. This was an emotional, boundary-pushing, thought provoking story. A definite journey worth taking."
Perfect
"I really loved how this came together. Out of all the writing and development from the first two this one is the perfect mix. "
I need more!
"I really love this story. It was a slow start but now, it’s hot and with smut BDSM like I love."
Very good writing!
"I like the way he takes his time with her😩"
Mon petit chiot
"Le BDSM c'est pas mon truc et j'ai dû mal à accepter le concept. Recommandée à ceux qui aiment la "luxure sans bride" Je ne juge de rien, je découvre l'inconnu, c'est pourquoi je me permets de lire ce genre de romans. Beaucoup de scènes obscènes, c'est vrai, mais le sex brute ça excite forcément notre côté animal. J'avoue franchement que ce roman m'a beaucoup troublé et pèse sur mon cœur du fait que cela puisse exister dans la vraie vie, les dons et les subs. Mais merci de m'avoir fait découvrir ce monde là à travers Logan et Rémi, et qu'il existe pour ceux à qui cela appartient. On doit respecter le choix de chacun, du coup, je le laisse aux vrais adeptes. "
Sujet delicat
"Sujet délicat traité avec élégance et bien romancé, bien écrit !"
