Loved reading through it
"The story is very interesting with a clear plot and amazing writing skills. No grammatical mistakes, no unnecessarily long descriptions and what I loved the most is the dialogue between the characters. They were playful, showed the characters personality and gave them some depth.
The story was an absolute blast yhe only thing I think it may have lacked is a more of a surprise elements that could excite the reader a little? The romance was also stale. Draven only ever showed subtle attraction, I also couldn't really picture the female lead because we didn't get how she looked (unless I read through it without realising if so Im sorry) but I think we needed a little more description of how the characters in general looked and it shouldve been more often mentioned so we wouldn't forget like the only thing I remember is Draven 's eyes being gold. Anyways the story needed definitely more romance. There were also quite a bit of loopholes in the plot but its still a very intriguing story.
I highly recommend it! "