¿Qué opinas?
Amazing
"I liked the way it started out and how they wrote Barrett. One thing that kind of throws me off is the fact that she isn’t shocked about the fact they are pretty much supernatural. Considering she’s human and in this story it’s not normal I feel like she should’ve at least be taken aback or surprised just a little bit. I also feel like they could’ve waited longer to have shared physical contact (kissing etc) because she literally just found out about Barrett and his brothers. I don’t know if I just like a bit of a slow burn or what , but that just kind of also threw me off how they’re suddenly getting along and kissing lol. Besides those 2 things though, the writing is amazing and the way this has all been unfolding is also pretty good! I absolutely love the humour , it’s actually very thoughtful to add some personality to this story. It’s what really makes one !"
Not enough emotions
"I would like the female character to express her feelings more"
The Grizzly’s Unintended Guest
"Fantastic story, and very funny. The dialogue was witty and the characters were well rounded. My only complaint was there were a few missing spaces between some words throughout the book, but mot a huge amount. Just meant I really had to concentrate to figure out what the individual words were, which for a dyslexic was fun."
🥰 Schön
"Sehr lustig und einfach mal anders 😍"
💕💕💕💕💕💕
"Es ist echt eine zuckersüße Geschichte. Absolut empfehlenswert. ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥"
Liked it
"I like your writing style and your humor. Great story line and I liked the growth of the male lead. "
How a Troglydate gets humanized.
"This a gentle start explaining who and what. Personalities grow in the level of importance they are. From city to forrest life does have a few interesting changes. I look forward to reading the rest of the story"
