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The Orc chieftain's human mate

"I loved the story. Anna was brave and determined, and in the end, she succeeded in what she wanted to achieve. I also love the happy ending"

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"Nice story! "

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Solid idea, flawed execution.

"It was a promising story, but it's just littered with inconsistencies. From changed scenes, to wild size variations for one chapter to the next. It simply could been written with more care to stay accurate to it's details and it's original scenes. Other than that it just comes off as too cliche or cheesy, as the dialog is rushed at times and is made to sound too deep and accepting too fast. Wouldn't recommend at this time."

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