Essy Pach

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writer, novelist, artist, film director, presenter, tv host... and as insane as a person has to be to create alternate realities with words, art and film... :)

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Bad boy judah

only one comment really ... "AND THEN...!" please continue writing i really want to know the rest of the story. slightly twisted but not a very bad kind of twisted....

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Playing with fire

Nicely written, and... "yes, you are a bad person!...." I really enjoyed it =) it so cruelly perfect... i was curious all the way to the end, which was really nice. Its an engaging narative technique that makes the reader feel as if the main character is whispering his untold secret to a stranger (the reader).

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The Knight in Stainless Steel

Where is the rest! I need to read more! The plot is nicely written. I loved reading this book. one of the best books I have read in a while. :) :) simply perfect.

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Boy Who Broke In My Window

so far I am hooked and totally a fan. Your narative technique is great coz it makes the reader genuinely feel like they are in an overly mature 17, soon to be 18 year old mind. Your discriptive diction is so vivid and spot on. The plot also developing nicely ...... in short I really like it so far I cant wait to rrad teh rest and see what happens :) :) <3

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