Essy Pach

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writer, novelist, artist, film director, presenter, tv host... and as insane as a person has to be to create alternate realities with words, art and film... :)

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Bad boy judah

only one comment really ... "AND THEN...!" please continue writing i really want to know the rest of the story. slightly twisted but not a very bad kind of twisted....

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the devils angel

Brilliant! the concept is amazing! The diction is a bit naive, but its refreshing and perfectly molds into the story. Just perfect! :) Love it!!!

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tree little words

I am grinning right through the whole read! It's a nice way to imagine how Harry's parents ended up together. I have always wondered how James changed from an ignorant child that bullied Severus to the man who fathered Harry. If James had treated Severus differently would Snape have been the same? How would things be different. Cant wait to finish the read :)

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The Knight in Stainless Steel

Where is the rest! I need to read more! The plot is nicely written. I loved reading this book. one of the best books I have read in a while. :) :) simply perfect.

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Boy Who Broke In My Window

so far I am hooked and totally a fan. Your narative technique is great coz it makes the reader genuinely feel like they are in an overly mature 17, soon to be 18 year old mind. Your discriptive diction is so vivid and spot on. The plot also developing nicely ...... in short I really like it so far I cant wait to rrad teh rest and see what happens :) :) <3

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