darriel

Enfield ✈️ Baltimore

Like my stories, I’m a work in progress. Full-time college student. Part-time employee. Zero-time writer with a few stories under her belt and a few more in her drafts.

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Sad :(

I really enjoyed the first two chapters! I like how the two characters, Nancy and Bella, are best friends who want each other's lives. It really shows that somebody's life can look perfect on the outside, but be something completely different if you look closer. I think that's really interesting, and I've never read a story like it! There's a few grammar and spelling errors, but nothing too crazy that would make me want to turn away. I look forward to reading more!

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Intriguing

I usually don't read one shots, but this one definitely caught my attention. It opened with a mystery, and that is definitely what kept me scrolling to figure out what was going on. You really did a good job showcasing the painter's story of success in so little words. I'd say there are a few grammar and punctuation issues, but this si so good!

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