darriel

Enfield ✈️ Baltimore

Like my stories, I’m a work in progress. Full-time college student. Part-time employee. Zero-time writer with a few stories under her belt and a few more in her drafts.

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high energy!

Reading just the first chapter I was able to feel that this was going to be a fun, high-energy story! It's good so far, but it's so fast-paced I'm sometimes wishing it would slow down so I could fully understand what's happening in the scenes. I also have a hard time getting lost in the book because there are some things that are unrealistic for a high school. Maybe it could be possible to have wacky realistic things happen? The protagonist is hilarious, and I can't wait to read more!

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Imperfectly Great

There's only one chapter published, but I can already tell the plot is great! The character is relatable, but she tells us more than she shows us. There were a few grammar, punctuation, and spelling problems, but I was still able to understand the story and the flow of it. I can't wait for the next chapters!

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