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Another promising book

From the synopsis alone Dapharoah69 is poised, in my opinion, to unveil yet another epic book in the Beast series. This is very impressive. The Prelude grabbed my attention immediately. I want to know why Doneshius's father spun from his porcelain skin, as well as his mother. Why do they want to kill Alicia Chay and her unborn babies? Wow and wow. And it doesn't hurt that he is fineeeeee!

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I agree

I can't say anything anyone else hasn't already said. Beasts 2 is simply divine. His experimental writing continues. He has one of the hottest stories on the site. I also like "Rogue" by another author on here. Mr. Pharaoh is a writer that take risks. This story won't grab the simple minded. The dialogue is very creative, very powerful. The back and forth between the protagonist and the antagonist is outstanding fiction. Sending him love from Europe. I read this in a matter of 17 hours. I give you five stars across the board.

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Outstanding

You held my attention. You are a good writer with some great ideas you wove into an awesome read. Round of applause

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Creative

I gotta hand it to you. I love reading. I read books everyday. When the book is good I can read it in probably 13 hours. Your story was amazing. Great prose, very imaginative. Incredible dialogue. I am deeply impressed. Keep it up.

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Wonderful and Informative

I won't leave a long review because I share the same sentiment as some of the readers. The book is grade A good. The subject matter is astounding. The protagonist is an arrogant, hot little number but after all she's survived who can blame her. The load of historic information is very different. The run on sentences actually aides the pace of the action and what's going on and is done very tastefully. There's a lot of experimental writing in this story, but that's what makes it unique. He doesn't follow formulas set by other authors. I get a sense that he's trying to be original and he dares to be different. That's how legendary writers are born.

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