Ewylja

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Amazing.

From the first chapter I was eager to know how relationship between Ghost and Savannah would develop. I was not dissapointed, even though there was no romance. I loved how simple the story line was yet every event and character served it's porpuse to create a greate story. What I meant was that there were no unnecessary turn of events (too much of those sometimes gets on my nerves) but there was just enough to keep you eager to read more. Can't forget about the ending. I love a good cliffhanger that makes you eager for the next part to be released. But at the same time this ending was perfect even if there won't be another book.
The only thing that I mind was that something was missing. For me at least. I'm not sure if I would've liked more history of Alexander in the Navy or his relationship with Savannah back in clollege.
Never minding that, you did an amazing job with this story.

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Loved it

You have done such an amazing job on this book so far. It captured my interest from the first chapter. I throughly enjoyed it and am keen on reading more.

There were a few times when it was a little bit hard to follow ongoings of the story as there is so much happening all the time and things changes drastically, but the way it all is written kind of makes up for it.

Hope you update soon again.

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Wow

I have to admit that there were a few times that made me a little uncomfortable, but that didn't forbid me to enjoy the story. Usually I am not into gay novels but "Sinister" is quite interesting. I couldn't help but to link this story with "I know what you did last summer" 😄
I think I am getting too old for highschool stories as I just didn't like how easy Ashley "jumped" at Levy, or how normal is seems for all of these highschool kids to have sex. They just seems too young (I'm 28) though can't say that back in my highschool days we were innocent.

I would've like if you had build Reigns advances on Levy a little slower. It was explained that he had feelings for his brother for years before the story took place, but still him coming at Lev so boldly already in the first chapter was too fast for my liking.
I liked that you kept the mistery of the killer through the whole story even. Usually there are that one person that seems super suspicious, but then turns out that he isn't the guilty one, but in "Sinister" no one is more suspicious than others. It could be anyone - Reign, Lucifer or even oh so understandable youngest brother. All of them have the same level of suspicion.
Overall the story was enjoyable and interesting. Some things I would have written differently, but this is your story and your fantasy.
Great job.

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Great

I loved it. A little different from what I've read so far.

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