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SPOOKED OUT!!!

The description of scenes has me on edge. I got goosebumps from reading this. I was literally seeing the story play out in front of me and I got chills. Your writing style is just amazing and I can't wait to find out what the hell Julian is. The baby!!!! I didn't know babies could be so damn terrifying.
Anyway good job and I can't wait for more.

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I WANT TO KNOW MORE!!!

The summary pulled me in from the start and I'm curious about the book. I love how it has been going up until now even if it's just two pages. The characters' reactions and dialogues are well written and I think I've just found a book I'll be a loyal reader to!!!

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EMOTIONAL AND INTERESTING

It's very emotional and has taught me a bit about Love. The plot is great and the summary is well written. I'm sure the story will progress as we go and I hope to see moments of happiness in the characters' lives because that was one emotional rollercoster. Overall, great job!!!!

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SWEET

The relationship between these two is sweet though the romance progresses too fast. The plot is great and I love that their backstories meet at some point. There are grammatical errors here and there but with some editing, that can be solved easily. I enjoyed it.

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I LOVE IT SO MUCH

I can't find anything to complain about as the story is so amazing. The plot is amazing and I found myself wanting to know more. I can't wait for an update and I am excited to see how the story progresses.

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NICE!!!!

The characters all have different personalities and are expressed perfectly making the story enjoyable. The female lead is not only strong and powerful but she is also kind and relatable at times. Has a lot of funny scenes that has got me reading non stop. I love the story.

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HOOKED

The plot is just amazing and all the characters are written and described perfectly. The female lead is strong and independent, just my kind of story and the male lead has captured my attention. Apart from a few typos here and there, I can confidently say that this is one heck of an amazing story.

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