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Unexpected Ending

Very nice short story with a great twist. I thought the buildup to the twist could have had a little more conflict thrown in, maybe more of a sense of urgency or secrecy in her work? Your writing style carried it through though and then once the plot twist hit, I was instantly sucked in.

Great imagery and writing.

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