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feralquill

You have a flowing readable style and like the pool of blood gathering beneath Lionel the plot has thickened just enough that I will take up your generous offer and read the rest when I have a chance. Oh,and Yes Wayne, it has been my experience that most Bullies when confronted have two feline traits. They turn into little kitties that can run like a cheetah. Good Luck with this contest.

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The Slam Decision

This excerpt promises a Quick and Clever and Kick Ye in the nuts funny read. I'm away to the Paper Shop for this one. From Antipasto to Antihero and a Girl with imaginary weaponry, unlike Karaoke singers with imaginary talent hers drip with blood. Yep! Worth the effort to get to the back page me thinks.

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HELLIOM

I'm an avid reader, since childhood, over most genre. Now, at 56, I rate Terry Prachett, and Bernard Cronwell in my top two. Having said that, when I leave my space and time, George RR Martin and Peter V Brett feed the need for food for thought. This excerpt would definitely entice me to seek the finished article and has the potential to sit beside Martin and Brett..

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