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Has potential, but executed childishly
Like the title says, "Ralph the Jinn" has the potential to be charming, funny, and perhaps even deep. But it does none of those things. Unfortunately, Ralph the Jinn is plagued with a juvenile writing style and an unfortunately overly colloquial and boring story. It has potential no doubt, and I have no doubt in my mind that with further revisions and polishing, it will shine. Right now though, it seems an awful lot like a rough draft written at 2 in the morning.Read the story now
Unique and engrossing
In Justice in Usono, we have a rare piece of fiction. The characters lack believability, staggeringly so. Even more so, the world is completely ridiculous. It is a farce, put simply. These are not bad things. Executed with the author's leveled, matter-of-fact tone, they become a successful critique of modern society, whose faults and shortcomings have been magnified 10-fold into both a comedy and a tragedy. Apart from the work in progress plot (barely begun I think) and sometimes heavy-handed descriptions, Justice in Usono is a ridiculous romp from hell to humanity and back, It gets no less than 5/5 stars from me.Read the story now
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