Michele Regan

Manhattan

Mom of three sons, a German Exchange daughter and a Chinese exchange daughter, wife of 20+ years, and physician.

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Good story, but lacks finish

The story is an interesting concept with mixed shifters. I have to agree with previous reviewer that we need more details to bring the author’s world to life. More show, less telling. The other major issue I have is writing in present tense. There are several reasons for this, the least of which is it feels choppy.

I encourage the author to add and edit, as I do think this could be a fascinating book.

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The Torment of Finding Love

Jo has created a wonderful story filled with the angst of trying to find love while having to learn to find yourself worthy of love. Learning to love oneself can be the greatest love of all in order to be able to give your heart fully to another. In this story, readers are left wanting more with each chapter, cheering for the underdogs and occasionally a little hot and heavy. Her werewolf lore is very enjoyable and not “just another werewolf book”.

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