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Hi! I am new here 😊. I love to express myself through writing and connect with people through it.

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Not what one expects!

Try this book if you like something different. I liked how realistic it was at first and how the plot switched at the end.
Glad I came across you. I can’t wait to hear from you about my book as you are such a gifted writer and it would mean a lot for me! 😁

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It’s going good.

Well… it keeps you interested although a couple of plot mistakes bothered me. Like when during the flashback the mod interview in the present time was mistakenly included. Or that the mom started out as polish and then turned German. Other than that it’s going pretty good.

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Such a sweet story! Thank you for sharing it! Keep writing ✍️

Such a sweet story! Thank you for sharing it! Keep writing ✍️

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Wow!

Very well written and the plot has this constant suspense that I never thought I'd like but I surprisingly do! Keep up the amazing work! I'll get back to my reading now 😁

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Very interesting plot so far. Keep up the good work!

I am waiting for the updates.

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Good effort

Good effort ☺️

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Give it a go!

Just give it a try and I promise you will like it. It’s very realistic and the plot thickens changing the whole story’s direction.

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Ok. I read this far. 😁

Well…it’s an easy read. Keep up the effort 😉

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Amazed by the language level for someone who is not an English native.

Well…some things just don’t make sense for me, so I don’t love the plot or the main make character (stoic), but thumbs up for writing this book so well although English is your second language. I’ll finish it as it’s interesting enough to keep me going. What an amazing effort from you. Well done.

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Not a native English writer

Try it out! 😉

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