fionacakes

Follow me on Instagram @fionacakes91 A Scorpio & empath from Jamaica 🇯🇲. I'm not a writer! I just have a wild imagination.

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Great Story

I love the writer's writing style, the tone is easy to follow which make readers fully enjoy the book. The character development is really excellent. I like the fact that this story brings fresh new ideas to the genre, which paints how great the author's imaginative skills are. Great story. I enjoyed it so far, waiting for updates.

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OMG!

This book is excellent. The plot was diverse and very unique. Loved the small mystery and suspense that kept me on the edge of my seat. I enjoyed learning about Ash, the plot flowed nicely nothing felt rush. Good job.

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Enjoyable

A great story so far. The writing style was nice. The characters were relatable and simplistic. Minor grammatical errors, but it did not take away from the plot of the book. A nice read.

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Mind-Blowing

Let me tell you that I love a good plot and this one was far past good...it was mindblowing. I still have two more chapters to read, but colour me impressed. A very exciting stories. The small twists throughout the chapters had me sec9nd guessing what will happen next. Way to keep your readers in suspense. Nice work.

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Whimsical

A very cool and whimsical story. I liked the tone of the intro and the pace of the plot is smooth and nice. The characters are likeable except for the family from hell. But a nice read.

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Absolutely Talented Writer

I was literally pulled into the world of this story. The descriptions were so vivid I could picture everything the writer described, plus the plot is unique and I could tell the writer spent time developing the storyline. There were not many loopholes, everything fell into place beautifully. Can't wait to see how it all ends. Great story.

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Surprising

Love the intensity of the book. The plot was different and enjoyable. I love, love, loveeee werewolf stories. This book deserves to be read.

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Good Plot

A very great story. The plot is amazing and I love the queen, she is amazing. The writing style was very good and the character developments were perfect. I would definitely recommend it.

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Great Story

Great plot and characters were nicely written. I was engrossed in this book. Can't wait for more chapters.

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WOW

Love the Egyptian theme. The writing style was great, plus the plot was amazing. The flow was perfect and so was the character developments. Will there be a second book or this one is the only one? So many more possibilities.

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Very Interesting

It took me two days to read this story and I have to say I am impressed. I loved the twist in the vampire genre. It was not cliché at all. A few grammatical errors, but it did not take away from the excitement of the story. The characters were well written and I did not mind the long chapters at all. A very great read. I will be checking out more books from the author.

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Very Creative

Very creative. I will definitely be buying this on kindle later on. A very intriguing twist on the werewolf genre.

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Loved it

I love this book. It has all the aspects I like about a werewolf story and I am glad the story has a female as the main protagonist. The plot is amazing and the character developments are superb. Just try and fix the lengthy paragraphs. I found it a bit difficult to read because there weren't adequate spacing, but good job nonetheless.

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WOW

WOW! What a story. Characters we're well written and let's talk about that plot, it was different and intriguing. I am invested. Excellent story.

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Great

Very hot and steamy with a very nice plot. I felt every emotion associated with the protagonists. Very great read.

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DESCRIPTIONS, DESCRIPTIONS, DESCRIPTIONS

This author is amazing. The use of descriptions is superb. The book has awakened my emotions, it played my heartstring like how a guitarist plays the guitar. This is how it should be. I believe that a story comes alive with the way the characters, emotions and places are described. AND the blood and the gore was just... WOW! This was an artistic piece, I am rambling because of his excited this book had gotten me. Thank you and good luck with your writing.

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Very Cool

Even though some may say this is a cliché werewolf story, I thought it was cool. I liked the plot and I appreciate your writing style. The tone that you write in is very good, it makes the story enjoyable. Just watch for punctuation errors, but other than that I don't see any other problems. Good luck with your story.

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Imaginative

I love it when writers try their hand at writing something outside the box. I can see that the author has a very unique imagination and I applaud her for that. Good use of vocabulary and a nice plot. Keep on writing, this was very different fit me and I really like it.

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Good

The story is good so far. The plot seems well put together. I liked the fact that the story gets into action pretty quickly. It was not slow or boring. Nice writing style, just add a little bit more descriptions and the story will be perfect, but a really nice read. I like it.

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Very Refreshing

A very interesting read. I loved the plot and the characters are exciting. I am obsessed with werewolf books and this one was refreshing. I am on chapter 19 and I just had to leave my review. I really like this story and I can't wait to see how it all ends. Good luck.

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JUST WOW!

JUST WOW! I really and truly enjoyed this book. Very interesting and addictive. I loved the plot twists and mysteries. I also appreciate the fact that the erotic scenes did not take away from the plot and the storyline. A really impressive read.

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Intriguing

The book is very interesting to me. I have never read a story about other supernatural creatures, other than werewolves, vampires and fairies. So this was new for me and I really enjoyed it. The writing style was amazing and the plot was well delivered. I am looking forward to see what will happen next. I will give the first book a read too. Good luck. A truly amazing story.

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Refreshing

I really enjoyed this story, I binged the first couple chapters and I would have gone more if my phone didn't die. I really loved the female lead. Everybody loves girl power nowadays. The writing style was excellent. Very romantic and refreshing.

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Well Written

Wow! The writing style was superb. Little to no grammatical or spelling mistakes and the plot was very mysterious, but yet fun and somewhat relatable. I loved the authors use of dialect, it was delivered beautifully. I am really looking forward to what will happen next.

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A Nice Read

The description was amazing! I love the writing style and the plot was very nice. But there were tiny grammatical issues, but I still found the story engaging.

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Impressive

My first time reading a book of these sorts and let me tell you, I am impressed. The collection was beautiful and well written. I love it.

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Entertaining

I really love this story. The plot and the characters are very intriguing. Just a few minor grammatical issues, but it's nothing that a little editing can't fix. Still a very entertaining book.

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