Sweet and to the point.
Adorable. I really loved this. You were able to take a complex concept, cut out the details and explanations, and create something that was simple yet poignant. The flow of the story is concise, but I didn't feel like I was lacking anything. It felt like the right ratio of details:plot. And your dialogue is great, sharp and realistic. Overall, I loved it. Nice job! Keep it up. :)Read the story now
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