fmleighed

Los Angeles

Twenty-something Los Angeles native loves to write about everything that makes her happy. Check out her blog: http://www.followmyleighed.com

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Sweet and to the point.

Adorable. I really loved this. You were able to take a complex concept, cut out the details and explanations, and create something that was simple yet poignant. The flow of the story is concise, but I didn't feel like I was lacking anything. It felt like the right ratio of details:plot. And your dialogue is great, sharp and realistic. Overall, I loved it. Nice job! Keep it up. :)

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