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Quelle est votre opinion ?

vampire

"i like vampire stories, taking long to get to the point but it is ok. i wil recommend this story to anyone to read. the spelling is a bit off but its ok"

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Frost Love

"Great story. How 2/3 species can find love but yet not find the love and say things than can be hurtful "

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Nice

"Ja ik ben er nog geen rekening met een nieuwe "

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Frost love

"The story starts off with action, which is a very good way of holding the readers interests. I especially like the plot, and like as the central theme of this book was given in the first chapter. The more I read though, the more the chapters became more of telling rather than showing. There is a particular chapter where the author just narrates everything. It will be better to describe it as you did in the first chapter, so we can flow with the story easily. Overall, the book is very good! I'd encourage you to read this if you enjoy reading vampire books."

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Good

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Compelling plot

"Interesting story but lots of grammatical errors. Also not a big fan of how wimpy/ sulky/ childish Siya is."

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