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Tatjana He

14 chapitres lus

Süße Geschichte

"Ist eine süße Geschichte aber etwas zu schnelllebig und viel Ereignisse. Kann man trotzdem lesen aber erwartet nichts tiefgründiges ❤️ "

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Super Buch 👍

"Es macht mir richtig Spaß es zu lesen ❤️"

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smalls877

29 chapitres lus

His fated Omega

"Love it. Good story. "

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Lily

13 chapitres lus

His Fated Omega

"This is my third story from you and I'm obsessed with the storylines 😍"

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April

26 chapitres lus

Van-Tastic

"I thought this story was really well thought out. And definitely unique with the clone/ Van Helsing.element. I hope to read more stories by you."

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mmslanker

0 chapitres lus

Wild ride!

"This one was a lot of fun for me, and I really enjoyed reading it; it wasn't at all what I expected going in. It started off seemingly with one plot, but that resolves and turns into something else which evolves from there. What the story turned into was pretty cool; I'd personally never read anything quite like it. Some sci-fi elements, not a whole lot of romance really. It's a shorter story so there's only so much you can do about character depth, background, and tying up loose ends, but I think the point comes across nicely for the book length!! "

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gazkatbear

25 chapitres lus

His fated omega chapter 24

"Enjoying this story. But some things are left hanging. Like the horrible aunty that kicked Rosalie out. I wanted to see Rosalie kick her out of the pack."

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Lynda465

26 chapitres lus

Avid reader

"Twisted imagination. A good thought sweet book but… diffidently worth reading."

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Suspenseful and engaging

"Loved the author’s writing, the description and imagery used and the characters. In the beginning It was sometimes a little confusing but it switched gears was fast paced all the way to the end. 8/10! "

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Kathy

22 chapitres lus

I think there could have been a little bit more leaving up to the beginning of the book.Currently. however, the book has good structure after that, and is well thought out. I am enjoying the book at this time. I'm hoping it continues at the same rate as it did after the first few chapters. I would recommend this to anyone. That is looking for a quick short read. At this time. I like books that, aren't Too long, but long enough to get the point across. I have been reading for over forty five years, and I rarely give a 5 to any book unless it is outstanding

"I like it as a book that is an easy read and i don't have a lot of words mixed up and i have figure what is being said, and once I read thru a few lines go back and read the wrong name or names from memory, and/or correct words in my mind, those types of books are frustrating, I am here to read and enjoy not fix wording even if it is in my own mind I am correcting those books, so well done so far on grammar."

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Ussi

22 chapitres lus

Etwas holprig

"Der Schreibstil ist etwas holprig, trotzdem schafft der Autor es, immerwieder Spannungsbögen zu schaffen, so dass man, trotz der kleinen grammatikalischen vaupax, gut unterhalten wird. Mit einem halbwegs tauglichen Lektoriat ist da sicher ein gut verkaufbares Buch. Sicher, es ist kein Austen, aber einfache, gute Trivialliteratur. "

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Okay Book

"It's an okay read to pass the time. With using a plot that has been so overused I had hoped that the author would have put a fresh spin on it, but I have been disappointed so far. The characters are well thought out, but predictable, and there are a few grammar errors that need attention. 3/5 overall"

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Not sure what you mean

"Nnmmmm mmmmm mmmm kkkk llll oooo hhhh ffff gggg cccc vvvvhuhh dsssghub hunching stuff there’s no need for me at this time I am just gonna go back and do it again "

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