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Loved it

"I really enjoyed this. The story was so engaging and well paced, it kept me hooked! The love story was beautifully written and you could feel the angst and yearning. Their journey is brilliant and the ending was fantastic. The chemistry between the two main characters is on fire and I loved the humour and banter between them. I’ve read a few books of Vero’s and each one makes me want to read more. Thank you!"

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Back glow

"This book is amazing, the story and everything. Great"

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Wholesome but also hot

"It’s a well written story with sweet characters and a love story you want to work out "

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Game Winning Touchdown!!!

"I really enjoyed reading this story. The male and female protagonists were written nicely. There were so many emotions riding in this story. The plot was very hallmarky with a dash of sex and intimacy. The epilogue was nicely written."

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Gorgeous 😍

"What an absolute pleasure to have read this story. I loved Ava's strength and sense of awareness and Jason softness and willingness to let her in the way he'd denied he needed her for most of their lives. I loved their banter and natural chemistry. While an epilogue or book 2 would be awesome, for me, the conclusion was still beautiful and enough for me. I can't wait to read more of your work. 👏 👏 👏 "

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Cute story

"I had a really good time with this story. It’s fun, cute, and really easy to get lost in. That said, I struggled a bit with the MMC. I think for me, the emotional balance in the relationship didn’t always feel fully convincing. It felt like only the FMC was putting in the effort, and I found myself wishing for a bit more depth or clarity when it came to his feelings. There were also moments where I personally wanted stronger reassurance about how he saw the FMC beyond the surface, especially considering their history. It didn’t ruin the story for me, but it did make it harder to fully buy into the romance. Overall though, I still really enjoyed the ride and would recommend it if you’re in the mood for something light, entertaining, and sweet."

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Glow Up

"Excellent!! Once started, I couldn't put it down. I NEEDED to know how this story unfolded & you didn't disappoint. You made me laugh & cry. Thank you for sharing your talent."

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OMG I'm obsessed!!! 🥹🤍

"Ich war direkt von Kapitel eins absolut in love! Danke für die tolle Geschichte. 🥹🤍"

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Liebe auf Umwegen

"Eine Liebe, die sich entfalten kann, wenn man sie sieht. Wunderbare Story, die so spannend und realistisch geschrieben ist, sodass ich nicht aufhören konnte zu lesen "

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Eine coole Geschichte

"Es macht Spaß sie zu lesen 💗"

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Romantique

"On reste en haleine L amour le vrai Ils se retrouvent Il la découvre Ils sont amoureux Que leur réserve l avenir?..."

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Génial

"Très très belle histoire merci "

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amazing

"I loved every single thing about this book! You know the ending from the beginning, but it has turns that leaves you wanting to keep reading it anyway. I started this book yesterday and finished it today because I was enthralled with it. Wish I could erase my mind and read it again."

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Glow Back

"I really enjoyed this story. Jason needed to grow up, and he did,almost too late, but he stepped up and showed her every day she's everything in his life. Loved this❤️"

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This is just beautiful

"A Journey of Personal Growth! It allows both individuals to heal, grow, and become the person their beloved deserves, ensuring that the love built can withstand storms. ❤️❤️"

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Nice work 👏

"This is my first time reading friends to lovers trope and it's good soo far...gald that Jason finally acknowledged that his life partner and soulmate has been near him all his life ..ava is an amazing women accepted her best friend with all his flaws her care,concern,kindness,love,sacrifices are on another level..women like her are precious gems.hope Jason treasures her..treats her like she deserves to be and Jason is the luckiest man in the universe...loved their little tale..checking out your other books author..Wishing you luck for your other works..😊💕"

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Glow back

"This was a great book!! I wish their was more dialogue between characters but overall it was a sweet good book. I couldn't put it down. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!!"

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Awesome

"I love reading this. It’s fresh, funny, heartbreaking, beautiful and real. I can’t seem to put down my phone until I’m finished. I can suggest this novel to anyone who loves a great love story, great characters, funny bickering. I just love this"

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Love it!!

"What a story! Both Jason and Ava are a blast! I love both their humour and how beautiful their relationship became. Well done the author, such an amazing story 💗"

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Glow Back

"Author , you are brilliant . The emotions , the conversations , the erotica and the story - all fantastic . I cannot wait to read more of you . God bless you "

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