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Quelle est votre opinion ?

Juste 5 chapitres, comment lire la suite ?

"Histoire aux débuts intéressants mais qui semble incomplète. Les personnages et les décors sont bien dépeints et le scénario est original et prenant. L'écriture est bonne et j'aimerais pouvoir lire la suite. J'apprécierais savoir où je peux terminer ce récit. Merci beaucoup d'avance !!!"

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The visuals

"In this book are amazing. Plot is well researched, characters are well written. It's been an absolute joy to read this book <3"

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Phenomenal!

"This is a fantastic space odyssey, full of adventure, tension, and passion. I loved seeing the story unfold from both sides. The tension of survival giving way to cautious comfort, then to love and joy - it was all beautifully woven together. There were a few instances where a couple of words were smooshed together. None of it impacted the flow of the story, however. Most occurred after a possessive proper name, like Vy'sthoughts instead of Vy's thoughts. I'd LOVE to read a sequel to this! Well done! "

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Eve of Desire

"This was such a great story! I would recommend this book to everyone! You did an amazing job with this book!"

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Karma

" Like the author, I was sad to read that someone gave this work a one star review despite never reading the book. Creative efforts are strengthened by positive reviews; all authors feed on such feedback and an enlightened and hardy minority will earnestly seek constructive criticism as well. Although the feedback in question was neither, I cling to some small hope that the one star reviewer’s post was accidentally created and sent when a half empty bottle of bourbon spilled into her keyboard, and I hold another more founded hope that the book’s author (artist!) will use such absurdities in life as inspirations. I have not read this book but karma demands that I give it a five star review. Done! P.S. It will be my next read. Larry"

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Eve of desire

"Good and catchy summary. Makes someone want to read. Good job "

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Eve of Desirre

"Truly a lovely story of gods that have lived centuries fight with magic, swords and spells but are centuries ahead of Earth in technology makes this love story different than what one might expect. "

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💕💕⚡️⚡️🔥🔥🌶️👏🏻👏🏻

"Absolutely loved it!! Your intertwining of mythology into the story was brilliant!! Would love to see a sequel... the birth of their daughter, bringing humans to their planet. Thank you!!"

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Eve of Desire

"Fantastic writing can't wait for more "

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Good Reas

"Unexpected read, not my normal BUT..this has me intrigued. Locmve the storyline, the softness of it. It flows so well. "

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Love every bit. Thanks you 😊

"You have a great hand for writing. I enjoy Zahirion a lot. Harsh, cruel, but Love that he is softening. Can't wait to see what happens next in this adventure. Hope her and her mother get reunited at last. "

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⭐️ Radical

"Cool concept 😎 "

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Profound

"😉Added to my reading list. The first chapters got me."

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Beautiful

"Book is lovely. Well written. I’ve read several of your books and you never miss a beat. Keep going. 💐 "

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New Worlds Blend

"I went back and forth in the beginning but, then the story grabbed me. I would truly be interested in viewing the blending of their worlds, and especially what their daughter and additional children could bring to the blend. Thank you and best wishes moving forward. 😃 "

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