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Fantastic!
"Very very good!!"
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Good
"It's good, plot is a bit predictable, but it's good nonetheless. I have finished in a single read. Wished for more romance between fida and cain"
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Up through ch 16
"I know I'm not even halfway through the story yet. But, what I have read so far is captivating. There's so much secrecy going on that the villains could be anyone. The only person I'm sure is a pure soul with good intentions at this point is Fida. It's like a "who done it" without the murder (at least so far). And as the characters begin to develop you can see that nothing is simple or to be taken at face value. Fida is definitely the answer, but I guess I have to keep reading to figure out what the question is."
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The woods
"I like that the book keeps me interested enough to keep reading. It is a good story line. There is a few slow spots. I also don't care how she just woke out of the woods. But I still wanted to read. I chose this book because I liked the fae story line"
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The Woods
"Brilliant story thank you 👏👏👏👏👏😁😁😁😁👏👏👏"
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46 chapitres lus
Great read!
"Wonderful novel! Kept me captivated right until the end. Writing was excellent and the plot was well thought out. I loved the imagery of the colours and different characters personalities were well formed. The only reason 4/5 is that the ending felt abrupt. Definitely room for a second novel to weave the final battle to the epilogue. Would have loved more! Thanks for sharing a great story with us."
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