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Quelle est votre opinion ?

Best thing ever

"I LOVED THIS BOOK! It was soo heartfelt and beautiful. I wish to have someone like Elias in the future 🫠🥰 Amazing writing!!"

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Greats story

"Really great story. First the most important: This was exceptionally hot. Extremely well written sex scenes. The build up was magnificent. The less important: It needs a good proof read- my guess is that authors can't go back and edit once it's posted without losing all their reviews and essentially starting over, which is unfortunate. "

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about the story

"I cried I laughed and at last i loved it sooo much great story and heartwarming ending "

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Bien

"La trama está bien. Le recomendaría a una amiga. Las novelas son mis favoritas "

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Nice Story, and Hot too

"This story is good... And hot 🔥🔥 Although my logic brain keep worries about the age gap, but idk at this moment haha. Give it a try, it's a good story ❤️‍🔥"

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under his command, my best friends

"I have now read this story for the second time. enjoyed it as much as the first .there is a lot of intrigue that just keeps me going. really entertaining. I recommend to anyone who enjoys a good romance, it won't let you down. please keep writing for us!"

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Inhibitions bypassed🫶🏾

"This story has my admiration in an erotica romance: my inhibitions were definitely breached, so I read it twice 😉 Beautiful storytelling 🫶🏾"

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Picante

"Adictiva"

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Top notch writing. Keep it up

"I liked everything about the novel Wonderful book "

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Love it! Something different!

"Great story,love the characters and the dreamy hero especially! Thank you!"

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El padre de mi mejor amiga

"Quedé fascinada "

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Der Vater meines besten Freundes

"Spannende Geschichte, pikante Bettszenen, aber nicht vulgär. Freu mich auf mehr "

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Spellbound

"So beautifully written, intrigued the whole way 💗🥰"

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Beste Geschichte

"Ich war fasziniert, super Geschichte toll geschrieben bitte nicht mehr"

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Loved it

"Its one of a kind story absolutely amazing"

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Hermosa

"Buenisima me encanto"

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Review

"Great story, couldn't put it down. "

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Under my command my best friends dad

"I absolutely loved this story. I couldn't put it down so I read the entire story from beginning to end. The author wrote amazing characters and adventures that flow with the most grasping plots one after another, Elias is the greatest man , the sex scenes are so good. Makes you almost want to go out and try to find someone just like him. "

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Such a great story!

"I couldn't put this down! Sexy, intriguing, suspenseful. Great great read"

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Excellent work

"I really love this story and its main characters. They are so engaging, so are the supporting characters in such believable situations. The author has written so well that it feels very real. "

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