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Quelle est votre opinion ?

Fantastic

"I didn't realise that I was in the last chapter until I read the last lines"

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The story line is good and with a good plot and scenes.

"I liked the plot and the way the story portrayed every character. I would recommend it to my friend and I liked the story that's why i gave a good rating "

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Facinante

"El libro es facinante, me decepciona q no esté terminada la historia "

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Amazing

"This was very compelling and interesting book, i dont normally read sci fi but this was amazing, hate Leo, hes a jerk"

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Liking it so far

"Some little things are a miss, but I'm hooked. "

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Great story. Some writing mistakes.

"Really good story. It sucks you in. Author makes some mistakes. No big deal, we all do. But not knowing when to use “miss”, “ms”, “mrs” and titles like “dr” can pull some people out of the story a bit. Still, love the story!"

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Awake

"I liked when I was young Science fiction was all I knew but as I got older it went away this might’ve brought me back the part where the furniture moved by it self was really great I told all of my friends about it probably in 10 to 20 years it will be true hope to get to read more about this story"

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Review o'clock 🤭

"This book is just... WOW!!... I enjoyed it so much and I'm definitely looking out for Book 2😍😍"

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Can't wait to see part 2

"Can't wait to see the next book "

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Please bring part 2

"I have never read anything something like this ever before this is too good and if the author is reading this, I request dropping to the floor on my knees please bring part 2. I can't wait any longer"

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Absorbente 🔥

"La novela es intrigante y candente por partes iguales. Me ha gustado y estoy eserando la secuela!!"

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Amazing!!!

"Leo is trash!!!!!! But amazing story!!!!"

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Awake

"A wonderful futuristic novella that I didn’t realise was a book 1 until the end. It is well written with a unique storyline but the name change of the brother halfway through was a bit confusing. I can’t wait to read the next book; a really great read. "

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Good read

"Yum!"

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Great story

"A very good story"

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Awesome

"This story is quite interesting with scientific details "

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Awake

"Every story you write captivates me and sucks me in. I love this story! I love the story line so far, characters, I love how you go into detail about EVERYTHING! I love how you paint the perfect picture. I love what "the future" looks like. It plays like a movie in my head as I read. You're literally MY FAVORITE AUTHOR "

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the million dollar virgin

"is the best thing i have read"

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I loved it

"We need an update please"

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Enjoying

"Original story line, interesting plot twists."

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