La Bête à ma porte

Kimmiegc

33 chapitres lus

Love this story

"Another wonderful written emotional and loved every minute and chapter ❤️❤️❤️. Looking forward to seeing what story you write in next ❤️♥️"

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salbee76

31 chapitres lus

Good but could be better.

"The story was ok but near the end the story line changed or wasn't explained very well. Her dad's alive but the letters in the chest are from her 'dead' father. Then it went from 3 months to Three years and a sonogram picture. Very confusing when an author changes up the storyline so abruptly. Also she had triplet boys and a daughter that's already 4 kids so she'd be pregnant with baby number 5"

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