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Hey darling
"Ur story is kind of interesting and sometimes seems slow for me. But i love this"
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Couldn’t Keep With It
"The idea and plot is there. However, there is too much repeating and emphasizing information that keeps throwing the hold of my attention off due to frustration of basically rereading the same thing or description written differently when it’s not needed. I’ve made it, what, 20 chapters? I open the app and look the book at the top of my list.., then close it. Because I’m wanting to wade through the repetition anymore. I’m sure those who can get past it will enjoy this story. Unfortunately it is what kills it for me. "
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