L'enfant aux yeux émeraude
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"This is an amazing story!! I think all of the stories I've read. This has its one category. I do love the ending. Have you ever considered extending the story? Like starting high school, first time driving, graduation, him walking her down the aisle? All that good stuff 💜"

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Johnny

4 chapitres lus

Heartwarming and sad

"This Story has a warm and a sadness too it There is no way someone can read this and not feel connected or relate to this story Keep up the writing please it is amazing "

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Lonely

"Beware. This story is single sentence written with a few paragraphs written in. That's what ,are, e stopping reading but so far it had been good. I could feel what Noah was experiencing and relate to it. "

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