Sherry Artrip

8 chapitres lus

5 févr. 2025

Very good

"Such a touching story! Very well written!"

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sherbear0713

8 chapitres lus

30 juin 2024

Great quick read!

"I was hesitant to read this because I prefer longer books but I decided to give it a try any way and I'm so glad I did! Amazing writing, the author did not skimp on the details and it felt like an entire novels worth of reading done in a day lol. No grammatical errors that I noticed and all and all I'd suggest this to anyone into creepy stories and I'm going to see what else this author has written and subscribe to them"

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G0REL0RD

7 chapitres lus

22 août 2023

Picture perfect

"This work has everything you want from a perfect horror/thriller novel: believable, down-to-earth characters, detailed, convincing narration, intriguing plot twists, gruesome acts performed by hateful antagonists, dark atmosphere of suspense, true human emotions, supernatural element and, of course, ultimate triumph of good over evil. Altogether, an all-around nearly flawless work that I've enjoyed a whole lot! My only nitpick would be some errant grammar mistakes here and there (some words or letters missing or superfluous ones appearing), but nothing too critical or ruining the overall impression. Also, I would really love for the story to cast some light on the mystery behind that 'Darkness' that tried to take Quinn's children, as well as the phenomenon of her granfather and Bryce's grandmother managing to protect them with their spirits. However, as always with everything left unexplained, this could make a perfect spare material for possible continuation, prequel or any other new instalment to this novel, which I personally am absolutely looking forward to. Otherwise, thank you so much for posting this awesome work here and giving me and everyone else a chance to enjoy it! Congratualtions on creating a masterpiece and wishing you every success with your further writing! "

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Donna Matteson

8 chapitres lus

29 mars 2023

The monitor

"Very good job"

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IB's kitchen

3 chapitres lus

13 déc. 2022

This book is so worth my time. Keep up the good work and I promise to follow your books

"I love the plot and your writing style It sure would make a great horror movie with additional themes"

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Fire Flower

8 chapitres lus

27 mai 2022

Awesome horror story

"I can say the plot gets scarier and scarier. I am astonished by the "stupidity" of the mother, who after all those nightmares and misteriouses (chapter 5), leaves the kids to sleep alone. "

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Emma

2 chapitres lus

26 avr. 2022

"The power of light over darkness"

"I love it so much i have read this whole in one day i couldn't stop myself from stopping keep going i love the plot at first i thought that Claudia was evil then the twist twisted me all i have to say is this is great amazing 🙂🙂🙂 love it 💖💖💖💖😊"

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AllenBlooms

8 chapitres lus

5 mars 2022

Please keep writing

"It breaks my heart to not have found this 2 years ago, and that it is the only book you've written, please keep writing, for it is one of the best books I've found in this platform! The beginning was rather slow, but it was totally worth it in the end, I didn't even realize how fast I was going until I came to an abrupt stop at chapter 7, only then realizing how far into the story I was. I do feel like some aspects of the plot could have been developed further, but for the length of the work, it's just about perfect."

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Eliana

0 chapitres lus

16 déc. 2021

hooked!

"I am so sad it ended already. For the past two days I have consumed this book and it is all that I think about. C'ant wait till this author rights more books!"