AllenBlooms

Currently in a semi-hiatus Aspiring writer looking for feedback (Eng/Esp) I'm looking for authors to read/ busco autores para leer

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Please keep writing

It breaks my heart to not have found this 2 years ago, and that it is the only book you've written, please keep writing, for it is one of the best books I've found in this platform!

The beginning was rather slow, but it was totally worth it in the end, I didn't even realize how fast I was going until I came to an abrupt stop at chapter 7, only then realizing how far into the story I was. I do feel like some aspects of the plot could have been developed further, but for the length of the work, it's just about perfect.

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