Fred Bacca

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Haunting Dreams

Lovely horror, macabre and well painted. The end is very well written and executed, gives a little information but leaves wanting more and a little... Which is a good thing :)

You have my vote.
In a similar vein to yours check out my story for the competition:
The Chamber of Twisted Echoes.
Please comment and vote if you deem worthy.

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Author's Thanks

If your are reading this then you have done me a great honor, you have read my tale.
I would like to thank you for taking the time and effort. The very thought that someone, crazed or sane, has read the twisted musing of my imagination is deliciously exciting; succulent even.
Since you have ventured into the depths of the darkness and emerged, more or less, unscathed into the comments section please leave a review or -even better- a critique. Why stop the voyage on the last leg?
If you find you have enjoyed it and consider it worthy, I would greatly appreciate your vote.

Darkest wishes,
Fred
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Hope you Dont Win

Really liked the story, enjoyable and suitably dark.
You have my vote.
But for, your sake, I hope you don't win...
otherwise you may have one hell of a lawsuit on your hands ;)

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Great Atmosphere

Greatly enjoyed your short story.

great sense of mystery at the finale and great scene setting through out.
Enjoyed it a lot! Would love for it to be a little longer or just drip out some more details.
You have my vote.

If you like the macabre horrors check out my story:
The Chamber of Twisted Echoes

Also I have resubmitted your story and would love your vote again if you consider it worthy.

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