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Meant To Be

a. The setting of the story is good. The setting is appropriate to the story. The time and place of the story is good.
b. The author used the third person point of view. The author narrated the story. It also connects the readers to the events of the story.

c. I like this story and if I have time I will continue reading this story. This story is about the young girl who are prematurely broken but as the time goes, the girl learn to love enjoy the life. I like every chapter of this story.

d. This story is very emotional than the other stories. Each chapter is so emotional. And when you read it, you will feel the emotions of the character. The author did a great works.

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Heal My Heart

a. The setting of the story is appropriate. The plot of the story is good and also the story is so cool. I can also relate to the story.

b. The author use the first person point of view. It connects the readers to the story. When they read it, they will feel the emotions of the character.

c. I like the story of how they meet, how their friendship and love story starts and I like also the character of the story. If I have a time to read, I will continue to read. This story is so cool.

d. I suggest that you need to develop your grammar so that the readers understand it better. But I like your work. I like your story and it is so amazing.

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I wish I loved you

a. The setting of the story is so nice. The events are arranged, the place, and the time. The setting of the story is appropriate and this story is interesting to read.

b. The author used the first person point of view. Because when I read it, I feel the emotions of the character in the story. I understand the feelings of the character. When i read it I feel like i'm the character in the story, I feel that i am involve in the story.

c. The story is very interesting to read because of its title specially its situation. I like reading this story and I will like to continue reading this if I have some time. The story is so good and the author did an amazing story.

d. This story is different from other story because of its unique situation. This is a love story that other people can relate and understand the situation, specially with the couples and married people. Everyone could relate in this story.

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