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Nice!

Your writing style is detailed and easy to follow. The story seems to be going quite fast, but I can't tell for sure because the book isn't completed yet. The characters were a bit cliche, but there's nothing bad about that if you can make them work with your overall story! I saw a few punctuation mistakes but nothing extreme. Keep up the good work! I'm very curious to know what happens next so good luck!

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Nice!

Your book is very well written and I literally saw no mistakes. Your storytelling technique is very good and the story seems very interesting. Can't wait for more!

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Amazing

I have only read the first chapter and i am intrigued. It's so well written and so full of imagination and it is very atmospheric as well! Simply amazing!

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Wow!

I was pleasantly surprised by your storytelling style! I loved this prologue, it made me ask a lot of questions. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Nice start to your story! I loved the beginning because it was humorous and surprising. You write well but there could be a little improvement with punctuation and spelling :) keep up the good work!

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