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Writing Goals!!

A story that is so compelling that it forces you to sit at 6:30 am in the morning, read the whole thing and also write a review!
The story compels you to introspect and think about the decisions you yourself take in your regular life similar to the way Cooper does. I love the dynamics between the past and present and how it affects Cooper.
It is also interesting to see a new past or a new memory unfold and the description makes it easier to picture the scene. The sentences were well structured which helped the story to flow easily.
It is very rare that I like the main characters of a story but Cooper was one of those characters who just seemed relatable and humane.
Overall a dramatic, intriguing and hella innovative read!

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Pleasantly Chaotic.

As a reader, I enjoy stories that are irregular and walk a different path than most stories. The Red Prince is a high-fantasy novel that follows the story of a beloved prince who has suddenly gone rogue and become a traitor to his kingdom. What follows are the attempts made by elite warriors of different kingdoms to bring the rogue prince to justice.

The magical elements in this story are truly beautiful and the writer's imagination is fascinatingly vivid. These vivid images are painted throughout the story capturing the reader's attention and hauling them in for the long ride. And spoilers but there's a realm of falcons in this story. (I mean come on that's amazing!) The concept of the red prince itself intrigued me and made me want to know what it was that made the prince go rogue.

I got my answers, now go find yours!

Wishing the author luck in all his future endeavors.

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Beautifully Innovative

Nothing about this story is boring or bland or uninteresting.

I usually am a person who likes reading quick stories when it comes to online work but the writing of this author made me stop and appreciate every sentence and every word. Each of the characters in this story has a story to tell and are nothing but beautifully developed. The story is about our MC, Lake, who gets accepted into the League which happens to be your modern day Justice League but is so much more. In this alternate universe, people are enhanced and have powers. Some are trained and are accepted into the League and Lake is one of them. However, there are many enhanced who cause havoc and it is them that the League fights and brings under control.

The MC Lake is personally my favorite character in this story, as I believe good main characters are so hard to come by these days. He is brave, been through a lot of crap but is a survivor and a protector. The way he deals with situations is also something that is so realistic and believable. Rowan too unlike most love interests these days, does not fall under the stereotypical bad boy trope. (And I'm extremely glad about that) He has his baggage but he doesn't act like a douche because of it.

All the other characters are so far from the usual 2-dimensional characters we see lot often but are instead perfectly developed and are consistent throughout the story. I extremely extremely enjoyed this story and wish to see a day when this story could be published and accessible to a wider audience.

Kudos to the author!

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"Congratulations, battle!"

Wow wow wow wow wow! How did the author even manage to write this story!!!

The dialogues are fabulous perfectly matching the background of the story. The language used is on point and every character is well developed. I recently completed the updated version of this story and it is truly amazing. The military vibes of this story is what got me hooked on to it. And what's up with that writing style!? It's awesome that's what. Although the chapters are a bit long and the proceedings are no dessert but the raw rough presence of the military training is really well written.

Kudos to the author!!

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Equality

In this time and age where we demand equality for all genders and sexualities, Mate Woes is a story that talks about equality in the werewolf realm. The reason I got hooked to this story, is because it rises above the cliche tales of the Alphas and their dominant behavior. The author takes the story in a different direction by not justifying the behavior of the Alpha Doms and has created a character who fights for his rights. The MC Jayden is a character that appreciates himself and has the agenda to fight for those who were done wrong just as he once was. At times the story really tugs your heart with its raw emotions and Jayden himself is a very sympathetic but brave character. Apart from some minor edits and typos, this story and its concept is truly amazing.

All The Best to the author!

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The Fifth Element

In the Fifth Element the author has managed to put forth a different take on the whole elementals business and twisted it into a very interesting concept. The characters are well developed and the their dialogues flow very freely. The MC is quite quirky and her powers are truly unique. One of the beauties of this story is the pace of this story as it is efficiently paced in a manner that doesn't allow the reader's attention to waver.

Over-all, this story is a soup of wonderful ingredients that has something for everyone!

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Demons and Myths

Demon dusted is a ride, full of ups and downs but the best part is that you share this journey with amazing characters. The plot is so compelling that it keeps on you on the leash till the very end. The writer is gifted with such compelling writing skills that beckon you to the end of the story. I have nothing but praises for this story and certainly a page-turner.
Overall a story filled with plot twists to the galore and a concept that is uniquely amazing!

Kudos to the author!

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Futuristic Vibes

I don't have much matter to base a review on but here are my thoughts so far...

The author has a very refreshing style of introducing each chapter which makes you feel like the beginning of a scene in a movie. The plot gave me a bit of the movie Equilibrium vibes with its futuristic aesthetic. I'm not aware much about the characters yet, but from what little I've seen, they have a lot of potential to shine when they will be developed. Sci-fi reading has never been much of my forte' and I rarely reach for it but this is definitely a worthwhile read.

All the best!

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Into The Realm of the Fae

The first thing that you notice about this story is it's smooth and elegant description. It takes it's time to make an effect and then_ bam! Before you know it you are hooked. Since this story is about the realm of the Fae, the writing style goes hand in hand with the concept. The chapters although slow-paced takes it's time in building up the world and the characters. What is even more interesting is the element of surprise where you are unaware of what new things the realm of the fae will now unleash. The MC himself being a quirky humorous character does not reveal much about himself which leaves you wanting to know more about him.
Over all, this story is like the slow burn of alcohol that takes its time to settle but when it does you are transformed into another world_Into the Realm of the Fae.

(P.S. Don't drink kids, it was just a simile. I got carried away)

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Short but Impactful

In a world of demons, Damin is here to save the day!
This story is a short but wonderful balance between good main characters and an interesting premise. The dialogues between the characters is well structured and flows easily. The MC is not you're usual quirky demon-hunter but is a boy who is attached to his work and believes in it! The world building is well paced and the chapters are intriguing enough to pull you into the next one.
Over all a fun short read with characters that leave a lasting impression and beckons you to continue on with their journey!

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Captivating

A captivating plot with a descriptive writing style. Easy on the tongue dialogues and characters that have a voice of their own. A short but worth the while read. Great job!

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Full of Life

I love how close to life this story is. Life is a ride and this story proves nothing but that. Nigel is put through rough patches and still, he remains optimistic. Annika was a beautiful character and my personal favorite bit of the story. All the flaws of these characters make them human and therefore interesting to read about. The families are beautifully included in the book making them an integral part of the story. Nigel's sister was just the ray of sunshine and I loved seeing her presence in the story.

Overall, this is a book full of the ups and downs of life, loss, and love.

Wishing the writer luck for all their future works.
-Rimits

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The Harsh Truth

It is so rare to find a collection of morbid but true emotions bled into a piece of work that uses the least amount of words to pack a punch. The writer has eloquently used her skills to talk about topics that are usually shied away from and go unspoken. Zachary, Royalty, Confused and Gold Leaf and Stone were my personal favorites in this collection. Each of these are based on difficult topics that are written in a succinct manner with a fair amount of thought behind each of these works. Sadie Ohio is confident with her words and with what she wishes to convey to her readers through her work. Despite the harsh topics of this collection it still remains as one of the best works I have read on this platform.
Wishing the writer luck for her future works.

Anxiously awaiting updates.
-Rimits

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Heart-Warming

I really enjoy poetry collections that do not sugar coat true feelings into something flowery to make it seem more artistic. This collection of poetry is raw and strikes at the heart of the readers making them bleed and feel for the narrator. The words are simple but what matter is what is trying to be said. I could understand these poems on the first read and didn't feel the need to read it a dozen times to understand its meaning. The writer is eloquent with their words and it is visible in the poems itself.

A must read for poetry lovers.

Kudos to the writer! Wishing you luck for all your future ventures!

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Full of Life! (*wink *wink)

I personally enjoy reading stories that are character driven and have dialogues that can crack me up. And The Metallic Love by Damian Grey is definitely one of those stories. The plot is managed by our MC who is shaped by the scars and burdens of his past. Although this story does speak about a cliche bad-boy who is falling for someone he shouldn't fall for, there's still a lot more reason as to why he is the way is. I haven't seen the entire picture yet but whatever I have seen so far I have certainly enjoyed. More than once I have found myself laughing and sympathising with the MC.

Over-all, this is fun enjoyable read that I am sure will be getting deeper as it progresses.

Kudos to the author and wishing you luck for all your future endeavours!

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Dreamy

True to its title, this collection of poetry is dreamy and beautiful. The right words are used in the right place and at the same time, the words want you to feel the other side of the writer's emotions. Every piece is subtle but alluring.

Overall this collection of poetry has a lot of potential and is definitely one I'll be keeping up with.

My best wishes to the writer! Hope you keep writing such amazing pieces!

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Good Beginning

I'm gonna be honest, these kind of stories are really not my thing but I am writing this review for the author's writing style which is in fact very amazing. The writer compels you forward into the story and makes you interested in it, even if it may or may not be your thing. I personally feel all the werewolf story lovers will have a field day with this story and will appreciate it more than anybody. The dialogues are spot on and there some minor typos that need to be corrected but other than that the writer has a solid future with this story.

Wishing the writer luck for all future endeavours.

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Nothing but Praises!!

I absolutely adore the writing style of the author. The dialogues are so flowy and the story makes you melt like butter on toast. The characters are awesome, the character building is awesome, the plot is awesome, the writing style is awesome, everything about this story is AWESOME. The emotions are so raw in this story and what moves you the most is simple but hella effective dialogues. Every chapter in this story is so perfectly balanced with emotions and equal character development. No character feels neglected or underdeveloped.

Excited for the remainder of the story. All the Best to the author and keep writing these amazing stories!

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Road Trip

(I'm not giving any spoilers. Stop being lazy and go read the story! It's amazing!)

For some reason, while reading this story I had the words "I'm on the highway to hell" on constant repeat inside my head (personal flaw, don't judge)

This story is a road trip full of highs and lows and characters that take some getting used to but hey, I'm not complaining. It's the characters and their journey that matters and of course the frog (the frog is really really important. Remember that frog) It is definitely a unique read with concepts and characters quite unlike most. I mean come on, a story that begins with a car accident is bound to get you hooked to it from the very beginning. The author has a very humorous writing style that makes the characters even more realistic and enjoyable. This story also does one of those rare things where it leaves the reader something to think about. The story is over but not its aftereffects.

Overall, a highly highly recommended story that is completely worth every second of the time you spend on it.

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Awesome!!

Honestly, I want to write a huge spoiler-y review spilling all the beans cause this story IS THAT AWESOME!! It's one of those stories you wish to have long debates with your friends over a burger and guess what? THERE'S MORE TO COME !!

The writer has created really well-structured characters whose personalities can easily be defined by their dialogues. I mean come on, this story is about GLYPHS!! And if that hasn't got you interested yet then the writer's intriguing writing style definitely will!

Overall this story is like a black hole that sucks you into it and shows you mysterious wonders that you witness once you enter the heart of this story.
Happy reading to you all!

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Intricately Woven

Five Times is a story that is intricately woven with the threads of the lives of so many characters.

The different characters and their different plot lines hooked me onto the story knowing that eventually, they'll all meet revealing their connection to one another. I like the uncertainty of not knowing what will happen next and that it keeps me on my toes waiting for the next plot twist. This, in fact, happens to be the writing skills of the author at work that pulls you into the story. Another commendable aspect of this story is how the author mixes a lot of Indian references into the proceedings of the story. The dialogues, the names of most of the characters and the characters themselves are Indians which to me was interesting to read.

The uncertainty of this story is what lured me into this book and it is for the characters (and their respective storylines) that I will stay.

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Remarkable!

From what I've read so far, I have come to the conclusion that the author has a very interesting writing style. that moves like butter as the story traverses ahead. This is a character-driven story which has an interesting concept but is made remarkable by its passionate cast of characters. Their personalities are so well built from the very beginning that despite having read three chapters it made me feel as though I have known these characters for ages. The reason I started to read this story was because of its Pirates of the Caribbean vibes but now I will continue reading it for its amazing characters!

Over-all a unique read I'm glad to have taken the time to read!

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Tranquility

This collection of poetry despite the tornado of emotions is one of the most peaceful and thought-provoking pieces I have read. The writer has a beautiful way of evoking emotions through her tiny verses that leaves you flooded with emotions. The concept itself is very unique and refreshing. What is even more unique is the way the identity of the two characters remains undisclosed and how the readers are allowed to let their imagination do the work. So there's a little for you and a little bit for the writer.

Overall a beautiful read that awakens your emotions and leaves you filled with tranquility.

Kudos to the writer!

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Laughter Inducing

From what I have read so far ( 2 chapters) this story has a very Sherlock Holmes-ish vibes to it. The writing of the author favors humor, therefore, making it more fun to read. Although much is not revealed about the MC so far, his character definitely has depth and has an interesting personality. The story is also very to-the-point and does not drag on.

Overall, this story has a lot of potentials and compliments my cup of steamy coffee. like a plate of fresh baked cookies!

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Oh My...

What even happened? One minute I was all, "Hey I relate to Sarah," and all of a sudden there's stuff happening that makes me go, "Wait_what?" Then there's the last paragraph and I say, "Oh My, what have my eyes just witnessed?" ( Don't mean that negatively)
I love how the story in its very short life makes an impact and leaves something for us to chew on. The writing style is as harmless as you expect the main character to be and then BAM! You were wrong all along. The story in all its subtlety is a gem that I am glad to have come across.

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Love the Plot!!

I love the way the writing is not excessively descriptive but manages to form a clear cut picture in your brain. It is very easy to imagine the proceedings of the story and the characters are incredibly realistic. Chapters 3 and 4 really did it for me towing me in for the long ride! The dialogues don't appear forced and just clicks in place as the story unfolds. I'm excited to see how the story escalates and certainly can't wait for more!

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Awesome Story Framework!!

Absolutely in love with the unique set-up of this story. It is completely different from what I am used to. The story had me hooked on to it when it mentioned "mysterious moon" and "legendary treasure." Although the beginning does feel a tad bit info-dumpy(I mean those names really need some getting used to) I understand that it is necessary for world-building but hey, do go easy on us :-) But second chapter onwards the story really picks up pace. A very unique main character and I love how the dialogue flows so easily between the characters. I'm very excited to see how this will turn out.

Overall a very captivating story, that catches you and doesn't let you go.

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