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Good start

I like the overall story of this book and the friendship of the wolf and the girl. There are a few technical errors, but not many. The plot was a little confusing and seemed to jump around. I do like the writing style however the story hasn't really tied together yet. I will continue reading though, I would love to see the relationship of Lu and Na develop more.

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