Gabriel Garcia

San Jacinto , CA

My name is Gabriel, but I also go by Gabe. I am a fan of DC, Assassins creed, and Star Wars and much more. I like to write historical fiction, sci -fi, thriller, adventure, fan fiction, etc.

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The Magic Tree House for young adults

This was a fun read so far. It reminded me so much of the magic tree house and magic school bus books growing up when I was a kid. As a person who loves history, the concept of going back into the past and preventing things from altering time is like a fantasy dream come true. I love every minute reading this piece, and I hope you get to continue it. And if you need suggestions of what eras you would like to write about for future stores with troy and Tristian, just let me know.

Again, I love this piece.

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These boots are gonna walk all over you

So far, the first two chapters excellent. I would recommend breaking up large paragraphs into smaller ones and just making sure to make sure specify which character is talking. Other than that, I am curious to see where you go with this. I like the story you have so far, I can feel the tension and inner rage your main character is feeling. I wish you the best and I look forward to whats comes next. I hope this feedback helps you.

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The Adventure Begins

When I started reading this, I could have sworn I was reading a book wither from C.S. Lewis, J.R.R. Tolkien, or even other authors like Victor Milan or George R. R. Martin. Your lore building and the worldbuilding are incredible! You have done a lot of research to start the beginning of something magical. Please continue working on this story. I would definitely buy this off the shelf. If anyone reading this review are fans of the authors I have mentioned, then you will not be disappointed with this. Please read this and help support the author.

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Best Great War story

One word. Immersive. I love stories like these. I love stories that make you get lost in the world. Please continue with this story. I see great things for this piece.

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Honor the brave

Holy mackerel, I have never read a more powerful piece in my life. You have managed to write a powerful piece about the scars of war and how the real battle is not in some distant place, but back home with the people around you. Words cannot express how much this story touched me. I have seen many movies and tv shows that use a concept like this, but your piece has more depth, more heart, more raw emotions. What I am about to say comes from utter honesty and sincerity. You are one of the greatest authors I have ever seen. I urge you to publish this piece because I believe that this story will not only grab the lives of avid readers, but also the many men and women who have/are serving in the armed forces of the past and present. I cannot further express my love for this story and your ability to create a narrative that is familiar to all.

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Stars next limited series

You definitely have my attention with this story. It reminds me a lot of limited series that you would see on hbo. Actually, I would not mind seeing a tv show adaptation of this. With a few grammatical errors, your story and the world you have constructed is fascinating. And just like those series, you never know what’s going to happen. Again, this is a really great read and I cannot wait until what happens next.

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Hooked

I love where the story is heading so far. I love the characters, names, lore, etc. there are a few grammar errors and I would recommend breaking up any large paragraphs into smaller ones. Other than that, keep up the great work.

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Amazing

I like the world you have created, and the names for your characters fit their majestic nature. I am eager to see how you expand further on your story. The characters were believable, the world has familiarity, and the word choice used is beneficial.

I look forward to your next update.

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The next Hit Series

This has all the makings and potential to become a limited series on Stars on HBO or even an intense drama. Even chapter feels like a full-length episode on Tv, it hooks the reader and toys at their emotions. This is by far amongst my top five mafia-related stories. Keep up the good work. I look forward to how you end this tale. One last thing, I really enjoy the pov chapters. You do not see these sees as much in books and I like that you have them.

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Beautiful

What a beautifully, crafted narrative. I love the concept behind the story as well as the character herself. I found it engaging and heartfelt. I would advise in ch 2 that the paragraphs be separated and spaced out, only to not confused the reader of where one thought ends and another begins. Other than that, I would also advise to make clear which character is speaking. In regards to those two pieces of advice, keep continuing this story. I look forward to see what happens next.

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Loved it

As a person who loves historical fiction, this was a great read. I have read similar books that discussed the same material and your book ranks high among them. I look forward to the ending of this great tale!!!

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