Gabriel Garcia

San Jacinto , CA

My name is Gabriel, but I also go by Gabe. I am a fan of DC, Assassins creed, and Star Wars and much more. I like to write historical fiction, sci -fi, thriller, adventure, fan fiction, etc.

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A new age has come to the land

Awakening from the Tales of the Known World Book 1 is a read unlike any other. With each new chapter, we are gifted with beautifully written prose and eloquent poetry that paints a picture of the world and adds depth and layers to the different arcs in the story. In my opinion, Kingard was by far my favorite character throughout the story, and honestly, his quest kept my interests more than others. I did have some trouble figuring out which character arc or quest was being discussed in the chapters. Still, after a while, I managed to figure out who the focus was and see how their different stories all connect. Very similar to J.R.R. Tolkien's Lord of the Rings and Victor Milan's Dinosaur Knights trilogy. The world-building and languages the author explored were some of my favorite aspects of the narrative. This book cannot be read in just one sitting. Just Like Lord of the rings, it is an adventure and must be read as such, one chapter or sections at a time, to fully understand the love the author has placed in this work. To any author looking for inspiration to write their fantasy piece or for those appreciative of the genre, this is a must-read. I cannot stress enough how committed a reader will be when they first read Awakening's opening pages. It will take you to a different world, and in the end, that is what books are meant to do, take us away from reality and let us live in a different world, if but a moment.

D.N.Frost, I salute you for the hard work, love, and determination you have put into this work. You have earned a follower and fan of your work.

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Honor the brave

Holy mackerel, I have never read a more powerful piece in my life. You have managed to write a powerful piece about the scars of war and how the real battle is not in some distant place, but back home with the people around you. Words cannot express how much this story touched me. I have seen many movies and tv shows that use a concept like this, but your piece has more depth, more heart, more raw emotions. What I am about to say comes from utter honesty and sincerity. You are one of the greatest authors I have ever seen. I urge you to publish this piece because I believe that this story will not only grab the lives of avid readers, but also the many men and women who have/are serving in the armed forces of the past and present. I cannot further express my love for this story and your ability to create a narrative that is familiar to all.

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Stars next limited series

You definitely have my attention with this story. It reminds me a lot of limited series that you would see on hbo. Actually, I would not mind seeing a tv show adaptation of this. With a few grammatical errors, your story and the world you have constructed is fascinating. And just like those series, you never know what’s going to happen. Again, this is a really great read and I cannot wait until what happens next.

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The Magic Tree House for young adults

This was a fun read so far. It reminded me so much of the magic tree house and magic school bus books growing up when I was a kid. As a person who loves history, the concept of going back into the past and preventing things from altering time is like a fantasy dream come true. I love every minute reading this piece, and I hope you get to continue it. And if you need suggestions of what eras you would like to write about for future stores with troy and Tristian, just let me know.

Again, I love this piece.

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These boots are gonna walk all over you

So far, the first two chapters excellent. I would recommend breaking up large paragraphs into smaller ones and just making sure to make sure specify which character is talking. Other than that, I am curious to see where you go with this. I like the story you have so far, I can feel the tension and inner rage your main character is feeling. I wish you the best and I look forward to whats comes next. I hope this feedback helps you.

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The Adventure Begins

When I started reading this, I could have sworn I was reading a book wither from C.S. Lewis, J.R.R. Tolkien, or even other authors like Victor Milan or George R. R. Martin. Your lore building and the worldbuilding are incredible! You have done a lot of research to start the beginning of something magical. Please continue working on this story. I would definitely buy this off the shelf. If anyone reading this review are fans of the authors I have mentioned, then you will not be disappointed with this. Please read this and help support the author.

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Best Great War story

One word. Immersive. I love stories like these. I love stories that make you get lost in the world. Please continue with this story. I see great things for this piece.

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A well developed narrative

I usually do not read coming-of-age stories set in the modern world. However, the concept of elves existing in the contemporary world and following the exploits of the last elf caught my eye. And I am glad it did. Meleeks' story follows the familiar structure of a coming of age tale, yet the author adds new depths to the genre to make it fresh and engaging. The story builds up a few chapters, allowing the reader to see the world through Meleeks eyes. There were a few grammatical errors in the story, but not enough to take the reader out. For a debut novel, this one ranks very high in terms of organization, character development, plot, themes, and reworking familiar genres into fresh takes. Altogether, I highly recommend people to read this book and continue to support the author. And a recommendation to the author is to continue this type of storytelling or worldbuilding and do spinoffs featuring other once thought mystical beings like vampires, werewolves, sorcerers, etc.

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Project: Aries

I like the premise that you have created. The supersoldier idea has been explored before, but this time you have up the anty and explored the horrible side of being a supersoldier. My only critique is that you make the story longer, as I was very invested towards the end. You have a great writing style and I think you should continue working on this narrative.

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One of a kind

I have never be more afraid of plot since ever. The imagery you have is incredible. You bring every scene to life with your words. Even the scary ones which ironically were my favorite to read. For a story like this, you don’t know what is going to happen next and that is the beauty of this work of yours. You can go in numerous different directions and still keep the readers attention. In regards to grammatical and technical errors, I could not find any, but I could be wrong. I am anxious to see how this all comes together. Keep up the great work.

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A Journey of Farjo

I am intrigued by the world-building you have set up for this story. I am eager to see more—fair use of the first-person narrative. You rarely see that in most fiction books. As for the main character, while I find their backstory riveting, I did find myself a little confused about when the MC was talking and when your other characters were speaking. I had reread just a little too understand. On another note, there were a few grammatical errors, but nothing too severe that takes the reader out. Even with these few critiques, A Journey of Farjo is an excellent read, and I encourage anyone who enjoys this type of fantasy to give it a read. Please continue to provide the author with support and feedback for this piece.

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Stepping stones

I like the premise so far. My recommendation is to make it just a little longer.

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A funny tale

Not gonna lie, this made me laugh a little. Some parts of the story were funny and honestly I could see being made as an adventure comedy piece like the princess bride. All in all, great piece. Keep up the good work.

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Hooked

I love where the story is heading so far. I love the characters, names, lore, etc. there are a few grammar errors and I would recommend breaking up any large paragraphs into smaller ones. Other than that, keep up the great work.

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The next Hit Series

This has all the makings and potential to become a limited series on Stars on HBO or even an intense drama. Even chapter feels like a full-length episode on Tv, it hooks the reader and toys at their emotions. This is by far amongst my top five mafia-related stories. Keep up the good work. I look forward to how you end this tale. One last thing, I really enjoy the pov chapters. You do not see these sees as much in books and I like that you have them.

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Loved it

As a person who loves historical fiction, this was a great read. I have read similar books that discussed the same material and your book ranks high among them. I look forward to the ending of this great tale!!!

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