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incredible!

The plot is super creative and keeps the reader's attention until the end!
The writing style is also great combining description of scenery and action in a way that you get into the story without getting bored by over-description.
The characters are very well designed and throughout the story you feel like they are real people. I love this kind of story and look forward to more!

One of the most creative short stories I've ever read!

The story is really well written and the plot is also very interesting and creative! However, when it gets to the action spots, the amount of scenario description tends to decrease and it makes it a little confusing to know what and how the main character is doing something.
Some places are missing a comma or a ". But those are the smallest details that are usually corrected after a review.
Anyway, I hope you keep writing! I really liked your writing style!

perfect for fans of the grimm brothers.

I love fairy tale style fantasy stories, and this is literally a fairy tale! The writing style reminds me a lot of old books of bedtime stories. The plot is very creative and in addition to fantasy this story still has romance and comedy in the right measure! The emotions you put into your story make everyone cry in the end!

It's a great story for lovers of the Grimm brothers.