Gajalakshmi Gunasekaran

Chennai

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Grammar Punctuation

Interesting plot

The plot is good and interesting, though some grammar mistakes are found. All you need is a little practice. Since my native language is not English just like yours, I can suggest to you what I am doing to improve in the grammar part based on the reviews of my story.
1. Learn punctuation in the compound and complex sentences. Remember the Grammarly app pointing this always. I think it's better to learn it rather than trusting an app.
2. Learn passive and active voice rules, as we tend to mix these a lot.
3. Improve vocabulary. I bought a few classics in English literature recently to know the different ways to tell a story and improve vocabulary.

It's okay not to be good at these, we can always fix them with little effort and patience. Trust me you have a really good plot, with these mistakes taken care of, it will be an all five-star story :)
All the best!

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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Broken princess review

Positives:
1. I like that the lead girl is presented as a mentally tough one.
2. The course of the story
3. Engaging plot

Suggestion:
1. Sometimes we tend to make known mistakes in a rush, so read twice before submitting. I have edited my story at initial chapters many times after submission, later when I noticed mistakes. So I read twice now.

Overall I really enjoyed the plot and flow of the story. I look forward to the next chapter.
All the best!

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