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Warlock and vampire

The spelling is off. The story line is okay. The characters are good enough.

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His

Grunting and snarling? Primitive males and educated females.

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Zenora

Some of the spelling was wrong off and you ride a horse 🐎 or animal not rode like a car but the plot and pace and imaginary places are out of control. I just wanted to keep reading 📚. I missed 😔 my shows and games just to read this book 📖. You have definitely 👍 done ✔ a fantastic 👏 job. I can't wait to see what comes next. Read you soon. Thanks

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Witch of willow lake

Going good so far. Love ❤️ the back story of Elizabeth

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Witch of willow lake

Gets better all the time. I really want to know what ms. Jameson is and what plans she has.

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The magi

I love the fact that it resembles the Harry Potter series. I’m hoping that there will be some more books 📚 to continue the series

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Married by chance then by choice

Although it doesn’t follow the story line of the hunger games series, I still find it a very story.

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Help the padawon

Never would’ve guess that one of the padawons could escape. Let’s see what comes next

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Omg

I’m so enthrall and sexy just reading 📖

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Ohmygod

You are so good 😊. The storyline is amazing. It’s midnight and I can’t stop reading 📖.

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Wildling

It’s amazing I couldn’t put it down. I was up to 2am reading 📖 it through. I laughed and I cried. It’s the best read I’ve had in a very long time.

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Short stories

Stories are inconsistent and are not of the same genre. It’s a mixture of half baked ideas

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Time bandit

I’m sorry about the last time I was trying something and now I’m just waiting patiently for a nap and then it’s going to be like fun

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Earth epoch the great glitch

I don’t have to worry about it because I’m never going to get chipped. It’s kinda scary just thinking about it

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Beloved

I have been enjoyed every day reading 📖. Hopefully I’ll get to read more by author

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Warriors of River falls

The book is interesting. I’m hoping Clayton isn’t her mate. Shawn is a better man

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Only human

Kinda corny but funny

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The last Harmon

Pretty good 👍. I liked reading 📚. I'll start on book 📖 2 tomorrow and see if it is as good 👍 as this book was.

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True soul

The story was quite interesting. It wasn't hard to follow. I fell in love 😍 with the characters. I wonder what ever happened to the vikings 🤔 though. Did they ever show up or are they still in hiding? COULD that be a tale for another book? I guess I will just have to wait and see 👀 as will all of us.

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Maiden of the wolves

Some of the spelling is wrong and the text is off but it is easy to follow what the author is trying to say. Overall it is a very interesting read and it makes me want to keep reading 📚 to find out what happens next.

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Blood - bound

So far I have found it to be a interesting story to read. It’s entertaining and fun a read. I can only hope that it doesn’t end like the last one did.

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Enigma 2

Oh my God. This book is incredibly good. I can't put it down. I gotta know what is going to happen next.

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Butterfly enema 1

I want to read more of this book 📖. It is just as good if not better than Harry Potter.

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Her new world

Some of the sentence structure isn't correct and the spelling doesn't fit well.

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