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Hats off

This is a lovely short story which has fully captured the essence of the art of writing. It is simple, visually stunning, poignant and has a surprising end. It is neither too long or too short and the reader can feel the protagonist's emotions. Wonderful piece of work.

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An amazing story

This is one of the best stories I have read. The Devadasi is an age old custom that has been a favourite topic of story writers and poets. This story stands out among the genre of such creative writing. The feelings of the unfortunate women who once held a respected position and were later forced into sexual slavery is depicted in a poignant manner. Krishnapriya's devotion to God and her ultimate triumph over the lecherous head priest makes a fascinating read. Kanakalaxmi's love and concern for the girl she considers a daughter is realistic as is her helplessness. The author's language is emotive and keeps the reader spell bound.

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