Ghassan

I'm Mystery

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You know what?

You've done a great job by exiting people and as you said, they just made fun out of everyone who read it. Keep up with your writing and plot because they are unique. Hopefully, I couldn't completely read before reviewing because I wasn't used to the scenes...Lol. But your description says a lot in just short phrases and you know just how to captivate and bring your audience where they want to be. Nice work!

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Superb

This is the best short suspense ever!! I love it. Your description is so good. Your plot, I can't track so well since it's short suspense but it's intriguing. You're good at writing this stuff. Keep up! I'll be waiting for more.

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You never stop impressing me

I read every inch and was very connected with your characters. I'm pleased with the ending and also felt a little in love with Joel because of his slight drama alongside Mack because of his boldness and a positive mindset. Though at a point, for me, in the last scene, I could keep playing along until the cops show up. What if Joel got him killed before the cops came in the scene. That sudden backdown of his acting wasn't called for because of the risk. Well, what was done was done and he was safe. Thanks once again for this part. I enjoyed it.

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Straight up!

Congrats, dear! You put me down to your characters and the beginning was just perfect to be so driven into it. I love your plot and description. Great Job and keep up the good work!! I haven't completed but I believe the end will not turn me away. Waiting for more of your works

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This is the best serial killer film I've read

This has gotten me crazy!! I have never read a novel as such! Like EVER! Look... you're a genius and I love your book. For this, I will recommend it on my Facebook page right away. I enjoyed it and hope someday, someone sees this and acts it. I want to see this in Hollywood. And I tell all those who are in this platform, alongside the Inkitt team, please do something about this short story. This is a great writer over here!!! PLEASE I BEG Y'ALL! Thanks and get it on with these works dear. You're almost there.

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