Ghassan

You know what?

You've done a great job by exiting people and as you said, they just made fun out of everyone who read it. Keep up with your writing and plot because they are unique. Hopefully, I couldn't completely read before reviewing because I wasn't used to the scenes...Lol. But your description says a lot in just short phrases and you know just how to captivate and bring your audience where they want to be. Nice work!

Superb

This is the best short suspense ever!! I love it. Your description is so good. Your plot, I can't track so well since it's short suspense but it's intriguing. You're good at writing this stuff. Keep up! I'll be waiting for more.

Straight up!

Congrats, dear! You put me down to your characters and the beginning was just perfect to be so driven into it. I love your plot and description. Great Job and keep up the good work!! I haven't completed but I believe the end will not turn me away. Waiting for more of your works