Gavin Lafayette

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Please Finish!

I love this story! Please finish it! I love the characters and the plot. I would love to see where you take it. It's entertaining and well-written, and I will definitely keep checking back until it is finished.

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Punctuation Errors Galore

This was hard to read with all the punctuation errors, such as not putting final punctuation at the end of dialogue and using apostrophes incorrectly.

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Great Story

I really like this story! The author has created characters that are well-defined and complicated, and the plot is intriguing. There are so many places this story could go, and I am looking forward to reading the second book as it comes out..

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