Grammar Demon

Mother of three, wife of one. Author, editor, equestrian. Smells like a barn, types like a fiend.

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What a cute story! Feels all over the place. And Sam's language and logic was so appropriate--but you totally captured the adult Sam's nerdly, thinking, wondering and worrying ways. Perfectly done!

Liked John, too. He was actually sympathetic, unlike the way he's portrayed in so many other fics.

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