Anna Reras

Adorable Read!

What a cute story. This cosmic teen romance set in a one of a kind fairytale world is adorable. All it needs is a sequel to see if this love continues and corrections with the paragraph length and how the dialogues are set up.

Gripping!

From the beginning the story is gripping! The plot moves fast, but that's what happens when s**t hits the fan and that's what happened to the MC of this story. What was supposed to be the hight of her life turned out to be a complete storm. Very interesting!

A Page Turner!

Every time there's a solution to a concern or problem a new one arises from it and ends the chapter with a cliff hanger. The few times when all seems perfect is only a calm before the storm. The characters are well thought out and are not your typical, overused personalities. The fact that one of the MCs is single mother who's senior to her mate is only one of the factors that makes the plot original and intriguing.

Big Imagination and lots of action!

So far, this reminds me of the idea of superman, but the difference here is that the hero has strong potential to go on either good or bad. Toby has good intentions and gentle heart, but much resent and insecurities and that sets the tone for unpredictability which I find to be a big plus in a story. I can see how his best friend can be his saving grace, but also how all that new power can get to his head. The writing style is entertaining and really gives a strong perception how the MC feels. The technical writing needs work though, as I stated in the comments it will be beneficial to the story if you broke up those lengthy paragraphs.

Daily Crossword Puzzle

I'm enjoying the french vibes in this story so far and how this romance has a mystery that both the MC and I are eager to find out. Such a good read during these spring time rains storms. Please post more chapters soon.

Thrilling!

Never a dull moment and each chapter's ending is a cliff hanger. It's suspenseful and full of emotion. It will take discipline to put this book down and always gives reason to come back for more.

Please write more soon.

So far this story is only two chapters long, but the characters are very interesting and show so much promise for growth and development. I look forward to see how this strange, yet intruguing friendship will develop. Please post more chapters!

My kind of fantasy!

The plot is unpredictable and at the end of each chapter I have no idea what exactly to expect. The characters are diverse in personality, there's ones that I like and ship and others I don't like at all. Intriguing and full of magic!

So Romantic!

The heroine of the story is relatable and genuine and the hero is as charming and handsome as he should be. The supernatural elements are entising and there is a twist in this werewolf fantasy that I haven't encountered before. The enemy is not what I expected and totally unfamiliar. The magic, the mystery, and the romance are all in good balance with each other.