Anna

Just another enthusiastic fantasy writer. Thank you for reading my stories.

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Fun and High Energy

This story is fun with high energy. and cute humor The MC is very likable, funny, and awkward, but the writer hints that there is so much more to her and the mystery keeps me reading. The love interests, the characters' personas clashing, and a secret the MC is hiding shows a lot of potential for a good plot. The things that I would recommend to the writer is to slow down with the time jumps and POV changes, because they seem to break the flow of the story.

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Loved it!

The plot is so good and the characters, especially the ronin are amazing. I absolutely loved the fighting scenes, the world's culture is well realized, and the wit and sarcasm are just as sharp as the hero's sword.

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Lots of mystery.

This fantasy is mysterious, has tons of magic and shows a lot of potential. However, I got a little lost with the plot. Lots of intersting things are happening but I'm not sure why they're happening to the MC and to those around her. With all that's said, I do recommend this fantasy to anyone who enjoys dark magic and secrets..
My advise so far is to work on the sentence structure, since I saw a lot of them constatly start with the same words such as 'she' and 'it"

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Please write more soon.

So far this story is only two chapters long, but the characters are very interesting and show so much promise for growth and development. I look forward to see how this strange, yet intruguing friendship will develop. Please post more chapters!

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My kind of fantasy!

The plot is unpredictable and at the end of each chapter I have no idea what exactly to expect. The characters are diverse in personality, there's ones that I like and ship and others I don't like at all. Intriguing and full of magic!

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Refreshing!

This werewolf story is unlike any I have ever read. It's unique and refreshing compare to the usual werewolf novels. If you love werewolf fantasies, but tiered of the predictability then you should try this. It will catch you off guard and pleasantly surprise you.

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So Romantic!

The heroine of the story is relatable and genuine and the hero is as charming and handsome as he should be. The supernatural elements are entising and there is a twist in this werewolf fantasy that I haven't encountered before. The enemy is not what I expected and totally unfamiliar. The magic, the mystery, and the romance are all in good balance with each other.

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Intriguing

The main character has the advantage of knowing the ancient past she's reborn into, but clearly she's not in full control. The enemy is relentless, just as her fate. But she's head strong, clever, and seem to care about her family very much. It will be interesting to see how this heroine takes back her fantastic second chance many readers wish they could get.

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