gabriela

I like to read and sometimes I also write.

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Interesting.

Good job with the prologue. It keeps people hooked and wanting to know what comes next. The plot of this book seems really interesting and it started with a bang. Nice work!

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Nice Beginning

The beginning of this story is good. You can see the plot, antagonists, potential love interests, etc. The one thing that I’ll have to say is that the book needs a little more polishing because it needs to be a bit more dimensional so that it doesn’t look like it’s literally a story. But, you have a good plot and characters here. Good job!

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mixed feelings

The story plot is good but I don’t really like stories where they focus on two characters’s relationship and then in the end they don’t end up together regardless of how their relationship dynamic was. I would like it better if the focus was on the actual relationship that the writer wants in the end. But that’s just my opinion, the writer can do whatever she likes because it’s her book and her writing and storytelling skills are very good.

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